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love2serve
02-06-2009, 04:07 PM
I feel you near me
Hands so firm
Pressure, bending, positioning
An unspoken question...
How far will you go for me?

I close my eyes
As hands explore
Something in me disappears
with words unsaid
How far will you go for me?

A breath so deep
required for life itself
you, holding, keeping me under
Owning me totally, with a whisper....
How far you have come for me.

ffion
02-13-2009, 02:00 PM
lovely - appreciation of a Dom for his sub, recognition of her progress, and the dedication of those efforts to her Master. the touch, evocative.

i wonder about the deep breath.. for life itself... more please...?

love2serve
02-14-2009, 05:46 AM
Thanks so much for reading my poem. The deep breath is because my Master wants to test me - he knows i am afraid of water and being submerged, and I wanted him to know that I would gladly let him hold me under if that is what pleases him.

He has given me so much that I want to give him something back and if that means confronting my fears then so be it.

ffion
02-14-2009, 06:51 PM
gosh - how brave you are! that takes some control... i am sure your Master will keep you safe and help you face this fear.

love2serve
02-14-2009, 11:46 PM
Of that I have no doubts at all

BryansGrrrl
02-17-2009, 02:36 PM
Reading it, and then the reason... brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing that.