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torrid girl
09-08-2011, 07:02 PM
I'm new... wanted to say hello :) so... Hello!
I've posted a couple stories and have gotten some great feedback. Thanks so much, I appreciate it!
denuseri
09-08-2011, 07:56 PM
Welcome to our kinky little corner of the internet!
You may like to check out the writer's block located a little further down in the forums!
Domin8or
09-08-2011, 10:06 PM
Welcome to this place.
Thirstyguy
09-09-2011, 10:27 PM
welcome torrid girl - i liked your first story that i read this week, and must say that I thought your grammar and punctuation were fine - there was just the odd doubling up of a word that needed editing out. And I agree there is certainly a lot of interesting thoughts swirling around in that head of yours, as I think you alluded to as well. Hope we can chat in the lobby sometime. :)
Xmaster1
09-10-2011, 06:06 AM
Oh yes. You have some very hot stories. Keep up the good work!
I also think you have great stories. I'd try to avoid using fully capitalized words for emphasis. I found it a little distracting in the one story.
rosebud
09-10-2011, 08:06 AM
Hello, Welcome to the Library!
Have fun!
xx rosie