Feedback!!

[himannv]

Wow, got my first ever story, published. (here: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=9483)

Also got my first ever review. Have to say I'm pretty excited as a new writer!!

[leo9]

I certainly wouldn't call that slow, it seems to work up to the action as fast as one could reasonably expect!