Looking for someone to edit my stories

[kdb]

I am a newbie at this. I wrote one story so far and it got horrible ratings. I'm in the process of writing 2 stories and I should be done with them by the end of the week and I need someone to look over my stories, edit them, and tell me how to mske them better. please email me at kdb_writer@yahoo.com or send me a IM.

Thanks

KDB