T-Luv
05-22-2003, 09:38 PM
Inspired by finding the most beautiful, perfect girl in the world on the Internet a few days ago, I've gotten an idea for a story. The story is narrated by a professional Dom who ends up with a rather young "client". I'd love to hear some comments on the beginning. The Dom is the narrator:
Tiffany
by T-Luv
Chapter 1: History
Every so often, a girl comes along who is singularly special. A girl who is born just a bit different from all the others of her generation. One who, simply by being herself, captures the imagination of everyone with whom she comes in contact.
Tiffany was one of those girls. Tiffany was made for sex.
She was the most beautiful young girl I had ever seen. When I first saw her, I... well, I'll get to that later. For now, I'll just tell you what she looked like. Tiffany was a petite girl, standing a mere five feet tall, but she was built like a woman at age fifteen. Though her breasts were only B-cups, they looked large and full on her small frame. Her ass was to die for, as was the pair of perfectly formed legs that led up to it. 30B-20-31 measurements, if you want specifics. Tiffany was also a natural blonde, with fine, straight hair that came to her shoulder blades. She had bright blue eyes, cute dimples and a gorgeous smile. I wish you could see her. She was perfect.
And, like I said, she was made for sex. Born for it, actually. Everything about her screamed S-E-X. I suspect that every man she ever met wanted her the minute he saw her. And a lot of the women, too. Tiffany cheerfully and enthusiastically accomodated many of them. I think she knew she shouldn't, but she couldn't help it. She was just that way. And so, by the time her fifteenth birthday rolled around, Tiffany had had sex of one sort or another with eighty-three different people. Yeah, she kept track of the number, as well as a lot of the details of her encounters. That's why she was introduced to me. But... I'm getting ahead of myself. She told me how it all started, so I'll have to go back a few years to the beginning...
Thoughts? I know it isn't much, but I'm experimenting with a writing style that is different from my norm.
Tiffany
by T-Luv
Chapter 1: History
Every so often, a girl comes along who is singularly special. A girl who is born just a bit different from all the others of her generation. One who, simply by being herself, captures the imagination of everyone with whom she comes in contact.
Tiffany was one of those girls. Tiffany was made for sex.
She was the most beautiful young girl I had ever seen. When I first saw her, I... well, I'll get to that later. For now, I'll just tell you what she looked like. Tiffany was a petite girl, standing a mere five feet tall, but she was built like a woman at age fifteen. Though her breasts were only B-cups, they looked large and full on her small frame. Her ass was to die for, as was the pair of perfectly formed legs that led up to it. 30B-20-31 measurements, if you want specifics. Tiffany was also a natural blonde, with fine, straight hair that came to her shoulder blades. She had bright blue eyes, cute dimples and a gorgeous smile. I wish you could see her. She was perfect.
And, like I said, she was made for sex. Born for it, actually. Everything about her screamed S-E-X. I suspect that every man she ever met wanted her the minute he saw her. And a lot of the women, too. Tiffany cheerfully and enthusiastically accomodated many of them. I think she knew she shouldn't, but she couldn't help it. She was just that way. And so, by the time her fifteenth birthday rolled around, Tiffany had had sex of one sort or another with eighty-three different people. Yeah, she kept track of the number, as well as a lot of the details of her encounters. That's why she was introduced to me. But... I'm getting ahead of myself. She told me how it all started, so I'll have to go back a few years to the beginning...
Thoughts? I know it isn't much, but I'm experimenting with a writing style that is different from my norm.