Me

[submissivewife]

Some have said she is beautiful. Others have said she is pretty. Which is it?

She has sandy blonde hair, blue eyes, and a bright smile. Many complement her on her blue eyes, saying how unique blue they are; many have seen the orneriness that shines through them. Her smile has been said to brighten up the room and makes her exceptionally pretty even beautiful. Her cheek bones delicately shaped to show of her pleasant features. Her nose is proportate to her face, impishly so. Her lips are thick and sumputous; kissable many have said. Her chin is stubbonly but delicately rounded to give her the look of a temptous. Many have read her appropriately just by a glance would you if you were to see her in the crowd?


Ok, Rabbit this is my descriptive paragraph, I hope it was what you wanted. Took me forever to decide what to write about. Even tried cheating by ask Aesop what to write about. Stubborn man, didn't get any help there. I did this straight through here so I wouldn't be tempted to use the grammar and spell checker. Frankly, I probably have so many you can't read it.

[Aesop]

Cheaters never win and winners never cheat. :p

Besides you did fine on your own.:)

[submissivewife]

oh well, thank you Aesop. I sat here and just stared at the screen and said "just type something"....so you got me. lol next time I choose to have my topic picked for me.

[Rabbit1]

Now my little Subwife ---use spell check and grammar check and see how many errors you can find

[submissivewife]

She has sandy blonde hair, blue eyes, and a bright smile. Many complement her on her blue eyes, saying how unique blue they are; many have seen the orneriness that shines through them. Her smile has been said to brighten up the room and makes her exceptionally pretty even beautiful. Her cheekbones delicately shaped to show of her pleasant features. Her nose is propitiate to her face, impishly so. Her lips are thick and sumptuous; kissable many have said. Her chin is stubbornly but delicately rounded to give her the look of a temptress. Many have read her appropriately just by a glance would you if you were to see her in the crowd?

OK, did the grammar and spell check. What surprised me is that grammar wasn't an issue for this assignement. The spell checker told me what I already knew: I can't spell! lol

[submissivewife]

Cheaters never win and winners never cheat. :p

:rolleyes:

[Rabbit1]

The whole point of this exercise is to show us ---we all need help ---English scholars rarely are writers----of anything but English grammar books.

so using spell check is one tool I suggest ---the second is the proof reader---and still some errors will get thru.

now take a week or so and write a few little short stories ---use spell check and a proof reader and post the one you like best in level two.

[submissivewife]

Thanks Rabbit I know I could use all the help I can get.