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Rabbit1
06-04-2006, 08:09 AM
Greed! by Sir Thomas

http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=2425

Size: 312 kb
Added on: Apr 5, 2004
Total 23908 readers
This month 4200 readers

Story Codes: M/f F/f enema modification toys BDSM slavery bondage real consensual Serious

Synopsis: Casey is a girl in search of a future in modeling. But by a strange series of events she is offered the role of bondage / sex slave for a strange group of people in Nevada. There she is trained for a new career, The training is harsh but tolerable. She is pushed to her limits in every regard. Her day starts with exercise in pony-girl bondage. It only gets more extreme from there. Why does she do this? Greed!




what are your thoughts on this story ---anyone even read it ?

maddie
06-25-2006, 03:32 PM
It's an interesting premise. I read through the beginning of it, but didn't get much further. I think it was pretty well-written.

Tojo
07-01-2006, 07:17 AM
I didn't read it all, not because it was bad, it's just been a long time since I've read any stories all the way through-I've kind of lost the urge...

Quite well written, & interesting. I quite liked it. Laid out well & flowed nicely.


Tojo