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poptart
04-06-2006, 04:32 PM
I'm feeling really down right now, but I think this says it all.....

Why does your heart grow doubtful dear?
Tense and beating, full of fear.
I keep with me your everlasting love,
and bless the day God sent you from above.

You remain my angel and I feel that I must,
tell you that within you, you have my trust.
My love is the tide, your soul is the shores,
you have my heart, do I have yours?

I'll belong to you till the very end,
and you will forever stay as my lover and friend.
It has been so good like this from the start,
so darling please, trust me with your heart.

poptart

Ozme52
04-06-2006, 05:58 PM
Serious... and a seriously good poem poptart. Good luck with your message.

Aesop
04-06-2006, 06:16 PM
Very heartfelt and touching.

submissivewife
04-06-2006, 08:10 PM
I'm feeling really down right now, but I think this says it all.....

Why does your heart grow doubtful dear?
Tense and beating, full of fear.
I keep with me your everlasting love,
and bless the day God sent you from above.

You remain my angel and I feel that I must,
tell you that within you, you have my trust.
My love is the tide, your soul is the shores,
you have my heart, do I have yours?

I'll belong to you till the very end,
and you will forever stay as my lover and friend.
It has been so good like this from the start,
so darling please, trust me with your heart.

poptart

Poptart this was so beautiful. I hope expressing yourself through your writing like this helps...in some way or another. Good Luck....I hope to see more poems from you.

poptart
04-13-2006, 10:10 PM
Thanks all, I haven't written much lately but maybe there will be more on the way
poptart