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ColinClout(c)
05-26-2006, 07:01 AM
Not really sure this qualifies, but wanted to publish it in honour of its dedicatee, in spite of all its manifold faults

I have no real idea where it came from, except the dark recesses of my mind - it just seemed to write itself on the way home yesterday. So with sincere apologies to the shade of Ira Gershwin, and a good deal of shame at having committed such cheesy lyrics, I thought I would pass it on.

Kneel for me,
My oh-so-spankable you,
Before me,
My un-out-rank-able you!
Just one chat with you, my heart leapt from within me.
You, like no-one else, bring out the Dom within me.
I love all
The nights I sighed about you
Above all
I want soft hide about you
Don't be a naughty cariad,
Come for Colin, come for Colin, do
My oh-so-spankable you!

cariad
05-26-2006, 08:03 AM
And as I read that Sir, in my mind I kneel before you once again, and return to that magic place .....

Echoes
07-27-2006, 09:44 PM
:eek:

suchaminx
07-27-2006, 11:40 PM
Wow

Tojo
07-28-2006, 12:50 AM
No apologies required for that- I imagine that particular young lady would be rather inspiring. :)

Thanks for sharing.

Tojo

wkcbitch
07-28-2006, 03:05 AM
what a beautiful poem!

submissivewife
07-28-2006, 03:07 AM
That is so special.....thank you for sharing. Lucky Cariad.

Timberwolf
07-28-2006, 09:35 AM
A fun little poem, no need to apologise for that.

Warbaby1943
07-28-2006, 09:49 AM
Nice lyrics for two lucky people.

SeX-FiENd
08-04-2006, 07:07 AM
a GREAT poem it certainly brought a smile to face, so playful but full of meaning. I really do hope you post more.

dzire2pleeze
08-05-2006, 03:17 PM
~smiling~ I can't get that tune out of my mind now. Gershwin would be proud of you. I know cariad is proud as well.

Sir_G
08-06-2006, 01:52 AM
Pretty cool work Colin. Lucky cariad indeed.

DaddyDom
09-11-2006, 03:16 AM
Huzzah CC. (claps)

caligirl{Rob}
10-03-2006, 05:35 PM
**smiles** all over
hugs and licks!
cali

elyse
10-05-2006, 08:04 AM
So with sincere apologies to the shade of Ira Gershwin, and a good deal of shame at having committed such cheesy lyrics, I thought I would pass it on.

See, and i think George and Ira would have loooooved this! *giggle*

Thanks so much for sharing, and for giving me a smile to start my day!

-elyse

frankee
10-05-2006, 09:19 AM
*smiles* That was great...thank you:)