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freedom37803
06-06-2006, 12:47 AM
Oh I have found my little home away from home here...I love to write poetry...so here you go...poem #1...enjoy!


I think I've forgotten you,
That my heart can move on,
But from nowhere,
Your smile fills my world.

The pain of rejection returns.
Old thoughts fill my mind.
Dreams and wishes yet unfulfilled.

I listen as you talk,
Comments and opinions of others,
The reality of never fitting your mold,
That I'll never be good enough,
Never pretty enough,
Never slim enough.

I'll never be good enough.
I could make you happy,
But still yet...it's not enough.

How could I have ever dream,
That you could want someone,
Someone like me?
That you would see me as beautiful,
That you could ever want me?

How could I dream?
When my life is a nightmare?
violetgem
09-09-2006, 11:02 PM
Aw, I just wanted to say I really love all your poems, they are all so good and filled with emotion. This one is great too and really moving. I don’t want to sound like a broken record every time I respond to one of your posts here but once again GREAT JOB!!!
Timberwolf
09-10-2006, 10:36 AM
Another very good piece here.
MsUther
09-10-2006, 12:24 PM
A long deep sigh escaped me after reading your words. Lovely poem, Freedom. Thank you for sharing it.
Talia
09-10-2006, 07:34 PM
oh this peom spoke to me...for many, many reasons...very well done.
Tojo
09-10-2006, 07:44 PM
Very nice indeed, thanks for sharing.


Tojo
Sir_G
09-10-2006, 08:45 PM
Ahh yes the eternal relationship insecurities and issues we project on those around us. The sense of never feeling good enough.

I thought your poem captured them well and it took me back to a time when...
frankee
10-04-2006, 12:08 PM
That was a great poem...made me think.
Warbaby1943
10-04-2006, 01:02 PM
Oh I have found my little home away from home here...I love to write poetry...so here you go...poem #1...enjoy!


Glad you found this home and please continue your poetry it was great.