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freedom37803
06-09-2006, 01:19 AM
I close my eyes,
Thoughts of you fill my mind.
My daydreams innocent enough.
Images of us walking hand in hand,
Soft kisses on a wooded path.
The innocence begins to fade.
I see your hand begin to drift.
They softly touch my breast.
My heartbeat quickens,
My breath comes in a gasp.
Kisses no longer soft,
Demanding a response.
My tongue finds yours,
Smothering in your embrace.
I moan as our passions build,
Our bodies entwined,
Leaves the bed of our love.
Our heat filling the cool night,
Starlight glistens on our sweat covered bodies.
Our moans chorused by nature,
Sensations filling us with pleasure.
Shuddering we sink into each others arms.
And I open my eyes.

violetgem
09-09-2006, 10:47 PM
I really liked that, I am not very good with writing styles and all so I am not sure how to refer to it, but I loved how you started with closing your eyes and ended with opening them.

Timberwolf
09-10-2006, 10:34 AM
A very nice poem, thanks for posting it.

Talia
09-10-2006, 06:48 PM
yes very nice...and I like how you chose red as the color of font for this poem.