His calm stare bores into me

[jennjenn]

i'm not as gifted as most here but i wrote this and thought, what the heck ill post it here =)


His calm stare bores into me
As a sea of tumultuous waves
Rages inside of me
Conflict stretches over my body
Like a balloon embraces the air
The words left unsaid:
“I am afraid.”
“I am excited.”
Not needing to be said
For they scream from my soul.
In agony, in joy
Others may not understand that
I am freed in my confinement
Exploring beyond the “shadowy zone”
where opposites meet
and attract each other.

[Uncle_Ed]

[QUOTE=jennjenn]i'm not as gifted as most here but i wrote this and thought, what the heck ill post it here =)


Sorry, I must disagree with you. It says far more than words alone can-that means you have the gift.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

[jennjenn]

thank you Uncle Ed that is very kind of you. You are all very talented writers

[submissivewife]

I agree with Ed JennJenn very well done...hope to see more from you!