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arwcuw
06-27-2006, 07:15 PM
This is not my first erotic poem, but it's my first BDSM poem; I really enjoyed writing it.


break me

blind me, bind me
sneak right up behind me
say you値l never free me
let nobody see me

rape me, stake me
tie me up and break me
beat me up and rake me
rip me up and strip me

each time you defile me
oh, how happy I値l be

submissivewife
06-27-2006, 07:18 PM
Very nice.....thank you for posting it.

Warbaby1943
06-27-2006, 08:16 PM
I liked it too.:cool:

GarrickBailley
06-28-2006, 02:03 AM
man..put that to Michael Jackson's They don't really care about us and you've got a great parady song there...

Avralivia
06-28-2006, 08:36 AM
i love poetry :) and i kinda liked it too :)

arwcuw
06-29-2006, 01:58 AM
Heh, thanks.

frankee
07-10-2006, 02:17 PM
That was really good arwcuw! i enjoyed it.

Timberwolf
07-14-2006, 03:21 PM
I think it's quite catchy.