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poetic_justice
07-11-2006, 03:57 AM
Lust

There is a man -
strong, dark, commanding.
His hand spands the width of your back...
urging.

His intentions are clear,
there are no secrets.
The brooding eyes demand satisfaction
the dance begins.

This sinister, irresistable man
initiates the sensual courtship.
Your world changed dramatically...
when he entered your life.

The deadly suspense opens your eyes -
and you realise
That you want it too.

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- poetic_justice

Silke
07-11-2006, 06:34 AM
*dreamy expression* this is wonderful, poetic_justice! Hope you'll share more. :)

submissivewife
07-11-2006, 06:20 PM
OOHHHH That was very nice poetic, I hope to read more from you soon. With a name like yours I'm sure you have a bunch tucked away.

Sir_G
07-11-2006, 07:10 PM
Mmmmn definately a nice piece of work p_j. Makes me wish I was the man. Love your avatar as well is it you?

poetic_justice
07-12-2006, 12:51 AM
Written this evening...

Angel

His soft voice rings in your ear
Warm breath at your throat, as He whispers
'On your knees'.

A quiet gasp escapes your lips
As His hand caresses the collar
Adorning your neck.

He touches the side of your face
And you turn your head to kiss His
Tender palm.

Gently He takes hold of your chin
Looking down at you as you look up
His bright green eyes meeting yours.

His thumb brushes softly over your warm lips
A smile fills His eyes as He whispers
'...Angel...'

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- poetic_justice

pixie_dust
07-12-2006, 05:53 AM
Yummy!!! Made me want so badly for my Dom to be here right now. Please write more soon!

Tojo
07-12-2006, 05:58 AM
Now that's D/s.

That's also poetry- very nice, thanks pj.

Tojo

Silke
07-12-2006, 07:34 AM
*sighs* this is beautiful, poetic_justice...more? :)

Warbaby1943
07-12-2006, 07:41 AM
Nice poetry. I envy talent like yours.

submissivewife
07-12-2006, 07:53 PM
What wonderful images.....more please!

poetic_justice
07-13-2006, 03:09 AM
Bound

Softly He bites your lip
A quiet gasp meeting His ears
As you shiver with sensation.

His body lies next to your own
Hand gently moving
Feeling the softness of your skin.

Fingers moving slowly, teasingly
You arch your back and whimper
With memories of His touch.

His voice haunts your darkness, soft yet demanding
'Be still...'
You close your eyes and moan.

Your hands close around the chain
That binds straining wrists to the bed
As His fingers travel lower.

He parts your thighs and whispers
'Just feel, Angel'
As his fingers sink deeper, and you pull on the chains.

A low moan escapes your trembling lips
His mouth pressed to your throat
As He claims you, yet again.

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- poetic_justice

submissivewife
07-13-2006, 03:11 AM
Geeze that gave me shivers....very, very nice!

Silke
07-13-2006, 08:02 AM
Oh my, I thought it was hot here before...but now...:D A delicious piece of poetry!!! Looking forward to reading more...

poetic_justice
07-15-2006, 08:14 PM
Thankyou everyone for the wonderful feedback, I will write more soon. :)

Timberwolf
07-15-2006, 08:19 PM
Man, those are good. Really good.

Beautiful. I loved every word.

submissivewife
07-15-2006, 08:24 PM
Thankyou everyone for the wonderful feedback, I will write more soon. :)

I know I can't wait

poetic_justice
07-17-2006, 02:10 AM
Heart

He comes to you, silently, smiling
As his eyes wander over your bound and helpless form
Blindfolded on his bed.

Quietly, he takes the whip
Softly hitting it against His thigh,
You stiffen, straining to listen for the slightest of sounds.

Gently the cold leather brushes over your hip
Jumping at the intimate touch, as you whimper
Against the gag.

The leather meets your skin with a loud 'crack'
Then comes the sharp, sensational pain
As you arch and tremble against His chains.

Again, the whip meets soft and tender flesh
As you softly scream
His warm hand, caressing welted skin, soothing.

Shivering, feeling the cool leather brush
Over swollen throbbing nipples
Helpless to resist His blows.

The calm voice, deep with desire, whispers softly
'You'll always be Mine Angel'
And you feel safe, as the whip meets your tortured skin again.

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- poetic_justice

MrDom
07-17-2006, 02:59 AM
wow they are great keep up the good work poetic.


MrDom

submissivewife
07-17-2006, 03:00 AM
That one was so hot! Very good poetic.

Timberwolf
07-17-2006, 09:12 AM
Lovely stuff, again.

poetic_justice
07-21-2006, 10:17 PM
Sorry it is taking so long to write another poem, having a mental blank at the moment I'm afraid. Will write some more soon for you all. Thankyou again for the feedback.

submissivewife
07-23-2006, 06:21 PM
Sorry it is taking so long to write another poem, having a mental blank at the moment I'm afraid. Will write some more soon for you all. Thankyou again for the feedback.


Oh I hate writer's block too...take your time we're all still here.

poetic_justice
07-24-2006, 02:16 AM
Pleasure

The warm hand softly wraps around your throat
Your head tilts back slightly,
As He smiles, and caresses His collar
Adorning pale and yearning skin.

The caring eyes melt your very soul
As you smile warmly at your Master,
Happy just to feel his skin against yours
As you gently get to your knees.

Softly reaching up, and taking hold of His belt
His kind hand gently stroking your soft hair,
As you hand him the heavy leather strap
And slowly undo his fly.

Pants quietly falling around His ankles
As your warm hands run down His thighs,
You smile, As He takes your chin in His hand
And speaks to you with His eyes.

You smile softly, lovingly
And take hold of His hand,
Kissing it gently
Before tasting the warmth of His body.

A quiet moan escapes His lips
As you slowly take Him deeper,
Warm lips pressed softly to His base
Looking to Him with hungry eyes.

As you devour His kind and loving heart.

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poetic_justice

Timberwolf
07-24-2006, 09:25 AM
As usual you have an elegance and an eloquence that I can't hope to match. Such a wonderful way of describing it... and such lovely imagery.

Wonderful work, again.

submissivewife
07-24-2006, 06:45 PM
WOW very nice!

poetic_justice
07-25-2006, 03:26 AM
Thankyou Timberwolf for your comments here, your kind words act as encouragement for me to write more poetry. You are always consistant in your kindness and I thank you deeply for those words. :)

Thankyou subwife for your enthusiasm and helpfulness while I have been writing. You're an amazing force that strengthens my abilities daily. :)

submissivewife
07-25-2006, 08:04 PM
Thankyou subwife for your enthusiasm and helpfulness while I have been writing. You're an amazing force that strengthens my abilities daily. :)

hell...i'm blushing again....I love your work...please continue.

poetic_justice
07-31-2006, 03:05 AM
The Touch

Gasping quietly, biting your lip
As He cups your luscious breasts
In his hands.

His warm lips press to your ear
Whispering softly
"Write more Angel..."

His tongue trails gently over cool, pale skin
Flicking your tender nipple
With His tongue, teasingly.

Trembling softly with pleasure
Hands moving slowly over His shoulders
As you arch your body softly.

Teeth gently close around
The sensitive flesh,
Biting, as pain shoots through your body.

You scream...
Nails digging to his skin,
As you struggle softly against His mouth.

He holds you still...
Sucking painfully, teeth digging deeper
As the taste of warm blood meets His tongue.

You whimper quietly
His eyes smiling as He tastes your life,
The hot surrender to his mouth.

The intense pain slowly easing
Lips sucking tenderly,
To heal.

Moving with you to the bed
As He takes you by the back of the neck
Turning your face up to His as He squeezes softly

Whispering "...It's never enough, Angel."

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poetic_justice

Timberwolf
07-31-2006, 10:50 AM
*mutters to himself* Lucky bastard...

poetic_justice
08-08-2006, 04:06 PM
*blushes*

Thankyou Timberwolf...

poetic_justice
08-08-2006, 04:13 PM
Again...

That sadistic smile crosses His face
As you enter His office, hands trembling softly
Watching, as He moves away from the desk.

He stands, walking towards you
Moving slowly around your body
Looking you over, as you lower your eyes.

He takes you roughly by the chin
Raising you, to look to His face,
As He smiles, hand caressing your arse.

Whimpering quietly as He pulls you closer
Strong, large hands raising the skirt
Gently squeezing the warm flesh.

The grip tightens, lifting you from the floor
Gasping softly, as He carries you to the desk
Setting your young body down on the edge.

His hands travel slowly up your legs, over your calfs, knees, thighs
Fingers spreading over the warmth high between your legs
Pressing, stroking, teasing...

Skilled fingers, grabbing the fine lace
Ripping it hard from your body
Pulling you closer to the edge, gasping.

He grabs you by the hair, pulling you from the desk
Turning you, slamming you down against the surface
The warm mahogany against your skin.

Gasping, begging softly, as He ties your hands behind your back
The torn lace digging to your wrists, as His hands roam
Moving down your back, lifting your skirt, smiling.

Closing your eyes, arching your back softly
As He kicks your legs apart, wider, wider...
Gripping your hips, fingers digging to warm flesh.

He smiles, whispers quiet words into your ear
Of love, of kindness, of passion
As you gasp, silently.

A hard thrust jolts your body,
Holding you down against the desk
As a soft cry fills the room, again.

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poetic_justice

Timberwolf
08-08-2006, 10:01 PM
Quite stirring, if you ask me.

Talia
08-09-2006, 03:19 AM
ohhhh that was so very nice poetic.....I think you've put everything in a poem that I've tried to put into a story. So very vivid.....

Warbaby1943
08-09-2006, 05:14 AM
ohhhh that was so very nice poetic.....I think you've put everything in a poem that I've tried to put into a story. So very vivid.....
You painted a very lovely picture with excellent detail. Thanks.

poetic_justice
08-29-2006, 04:37 AM
FEAR...

The strong hands grip your wrists
Pushing back to the bed
Squeezing, as you whimper softly.

His body looms over you
His warm breath on your skin
Watching you turn your face away.

Tender lips travel lower
Brushing lightly over the bruised
And reddened flesh.

Gently taking a hard nipple into His mouth
Gasping in pain as His teeth twist
Flesh molding around His tongue and teeth.

Small body bucking slightly under His weight
Trying to escape the torturous mouth
As He rises up your form, holding you.

His muscled thighs over your arms,
The weight of Him on your chest
As the black fingernails grip the sheets.

Gripping the back of your head, taking your hair in His hand
He smiles, watching you shiver subtly with pain
Warm thumb brushing over your swollen throbbing lips.

A quiet whisper echos around your ears "Open"
Slowly your mouth opens, tongue wetting the warm lips
Dark lashes covering the emotional eyes, soul flying.

Mouth opening wider, lips stretching to the point of tearing
The feeling of warm hardness filling your mouth
Almost splitting you, moaning.

Your young body trembles softly
Moaning with exertion
As He pushes deeper, rising over you.

Eyes widen, filling your mouth as you struggle
Holding you down as He slips deeper into your mouth
Quivering, swollen knob sliding down your throat, gasping.

You tilt your head back softly, letting Him push harder, deeper
Moaning loudly, nails digging to the palm of your hands
Pale skin contrasting against the dark sheets, ravishing your tender mouth.

His thick base pressed to your lips, as you close your eyes
Face and neck flushed, unable to breath
As He holds still, feeling your fear.

Opening your eyes, to look up at your assailant, your lover, your friend
Feeling the light, searching eyes pierce your soul
As He takes you to the edge, leaving you there.

For just a moment.

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poetic_justice

Timberwolf
08-29-2006, 08:28 AM
As usual you strike me as having an elegance in your writing that is well beyond your years.

poetic_justice
08-30-2006, 02:37 AM
Thankyou Timberwolf, so much

;rose;