The Scar

[Sir_G]

She is there like a shadow in my mind
She haunts me day after day time after time
I paint lines on her breasts and take her to the edge
and then she is gone

She taunts me raising my ire
Her submission fuels my desire
I shudder as I spend in her well
and then she is gone

She begs me for pain to slake her lust
I tie her and whip her, then she comes as she must
I reach out to touch her
but she is gone

Where are you my lady and where have you gone
I know you are out there, to me you belong
I live in this void
because you are gone

[arwcuw]

I like it. I wonder where she went. To the bathroom, maybe?

Sorry. It's very nice.

[submissivewife]

I like it. I wonder where she went. To the bathroom, maybe?

Sorry. It's very nice.

When a person posts a poem it is of deep thoughts and feelings.....please remember this next time. Inappropriate posts like this are hurtful.


Greg...it was a great poem...very deep and sincere. Please continue to post your poems.

[davesmistress]

I thought it was beautiful....thanks for sharing your feelings.

[Silke]

phew...a lot of hurt in this poem. I hope writing this helped - thanks for sharing something so intimate. :)

[Alex Bragi]

Greg...it was a great poem...very deep and sincere. Please continue to post your poems.

Absolutley.

You've kept it simple while still managing to paint vivid mental images with those lovely pros which I suppose is what good poetry is all about. :)

[Timberwolf]

Good work.

[poetic_justice]

That was beautiful Greg, please keep writing.

- p_j