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kaelyn
07-19-2006, 06:30 AM
Every day without you
It gets a little harder to breath,
The day that they killed you
They killed a huge part of me.

It didn’t seem like your time
It wasn’t right for you to go,
I don’t understand why God took you
And I guess I’ll never know.

I talk to you all the time
As if you weren’t gone,
I convince myself you can hear my voice
It helps me to stay strong.

It’s hard not to cry
Every time I think of you,
I wish God could have been kinder
I wish he took me too.

Your face runs through my mind
All the great times we shared,
I thought God was suppose to be good
But now he just seems unfair.

I never thought this day would come
When I would cry so many tears,
I wish that things were different
I wish that you were still here.

I don’t understand why my heart beats
And why your’s had to stop,
It’s not fair that I have to live on
And now you’re inside a box.

I can’t explain how much I miss you
And how much pain I feel,
Since the day they took you
My life has been surreal.

I hope that when I finally die
You will be there to open up the gates,
But until that day comes
In my heart you will always have a place.

Silke
07-19-2006, 06:32 AM
*hugs*

Uncle_Ed
07-19-2006, 06:37 AM
Hey kaelyn,

Powerful stuff. Hits hard. *hug*

Asia
07-19-2006, 06:40 AM
For once, I am speechless.
Beautiful.
Asia
xxx

Timberwolf
07-19-2006, 09:36 AM
There's nothing I can add to that. *hugs* if you want them.

Warbaby1943
07-19-2006, 09:43 AM
Great sentiment and deep feelings show in your writing.:wave:

submissivewife
07-19-2006, 09:12 PM
just makes you want to cry....brought tears to my eyes....

kaelyn
07-19-2006, 11:23 PM
Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem. And thanks for the kind words and the hugs- I always appreciate hugs and I always want to hug back so big hug back to everyone!!!!!

mina
07-20-2006, 12:30 AM
Aww that made me cry. *gives kaelyn more hugs*

Tojo
07-20-2006, 01:07 AM
Geez kaelyn, that's sure something to think about- thanks for sharing it with us.


Tojo

davesmistress
07-20-2006, 07:19 AM
Absolutely Beautiful...thank you so much for sharing it.

MasterRob{cali}
08-01-2006, 08:24 AM
well, i am moved , HUG HUG HUG,,,

Master_Rob

cariad
08-01-2006, 12:35 PM
Mind still as the sentiments you express echo around.

Holding you

cariad

caligirl{Rob}
08-13-2006, 12:22 PM
**hugs**

Piercingaze
08-14-2006, 06:32 AM
That poem was amzing Kaelyn. Very emotional and moving. *hugs*