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wistan
08-06-2006, 06:36 AM
Is there any way to stop the world from turning?
Is there any way to change the path we're on?
Is there any way to stop a forest burning?
Any longer and I fear we'll all be gone.

So many men with their rockets full of danger,
Each a phallus holding not new life but death.
A promise to an unsuspecting stranger,
That he is shortly going to draw his final breath.

And the little girl who sees her father marching,
Never knowing if he marches to his grave.
Am I the only one who thinks all life is precious?
And something we all should - and MUST - attempt to save?

-Wistan

Talia
08-06-2006, 07:56 PM
mmmm WOW....I'm speechless....keep posting...

Timberwolf
08-06-2006, 08:13 PM
Thumbs up from me, good work.

Sir_G
08-06-2006, 09:03 PM
Good poem, a mirror for the times we live in. Sometimes I wonder if we'll make it as a race.

kaelyn
08-08-2006, 11:22 AM
wow, that was really well written and very moving.

MasterRob{cali}
08-08-2006, 02:40 PM
Very good, enjoyed it and it makes me think
Thank You
Master Rob

wistan
08-08-2006, 03:37 PM
Thanks all, glad you liked it.