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Timberwolf
08-12-2006, 08:24 AM
Wolf

I kneel before you, wanting you
With my eyes, I seek your guidance
You pull your leash, on the collar around my throat
My neck and my will bound to your guiding hand
I come to you, I sit before you
Exactly where you want me to be
Such a good dog

I catch your scent
My mouth waters, my pulse quickens
I must have it, but you deny, with a smile
Hands out in front, I beg, with a smile
And whimper, wanting, needing
Our private little trick, in our private little passion
Such a good dog

You beckon me to come
I growl
My eyes pierce into you
And forward I come, to taste the sweetest fruit
My tongue, a tool of your pleasure
And mine
Such a good dog

You lay back
And writhe, and squirm, and sigh, and moan
I am insatiable, there can never be enough
You buck, and slide, and try to escape
But I am not finished yet
And I will not stop until I decide I am
Such a good dog

Your eyes grow desperate
My eyes grow hungry
It is time for me to mount you
To take you, to make you my own
For us to bond in lust, in heat, and in fervor
Our passion always bordering on animalistic
Such a good dog

I throw myself on top of you
Your body willing, open, mine
As mine is yours, my Goddess
The immaculate divinity of your body wrapped around me
I growl, I moan, I thrust, I pulse, I take what is mine to take
As we lay together wrapped in our private bond of bliss
Such a good dog

After the heat begins to fade, some time later
I again slide down your frame
My place is to lay at your feet
To wait for your hand to guide my leash
For when you need me again
For the special passion only I have given you
Such a good dog

I will wear your leash, with great pride
And I will follow willingly where you lead
For to be with one such as you, it is an honor
But to truly tame me is never what you wanted
If you’d wanted one that would only follow and never lead
You never would have chosen The Wolf
Such a good dog

MsUther
08-12-2006, 08:30 AM
Your words create desperatly vivid images, and I love this piece you have made. Such a good Wolf.
Thank you for sharing, Timberwolf.

Timberwolf
08-12-2006, 09:27 AM
I thought you might like this one, MSUther. ;)

I have to admit, I myself am very fond of this one, and proud of it as well. It does detail one of my more intimate desires.

Widget
08-12-2006, 09:52 AM
"The immaculate divinity of your body wrapped around me"

I liked this one very much Timberwolf

KermitsKeeper
08-12-2006, 09:56 AM
Such a good dog! Very impressive, Timberwolf!

Timberwolf
08-12-2006, 09:58 AM
Thank you Widget and KermitsKeeper for your kind words.

lily27
08-12-2006, 10:46 AM
Amazing.

*feeling a little warm in here*

Timberwolf
08-12-2006, 10:52 AM
Thank you, incorrigible one. ;)

Asia
08-12-2006, 02:47 PM
Positively aching while reading your words Wolf.
Such a bad, wild dog, but he doesn't need taming *smiles*
Asia
xxx

Silke
08-12-2006, 03:04 PM
Veeeeeeery hot...c'mon, be a good dog and post more. ;)

Timberwolf
08-12-2006, 03:30 PM
Thanks to you both, Asia and Silke.

poetic_justice
08-13-2006, 03:00 AM
That was absolutely amazing Timberwolf, truly beautiful imagery with a depth to your writing that shows the feeling and sensation and intense emotion you felt during the action itself.

Please continue writing.

Timberwolf
08-13-2006, 09:20 AM
Thanks for your kind words and support poetic justice.

Aussiegirl1
08-13-2006, 02:38 PM
I have agree with the thoughts above, Timberwolf. Wow, that was wonderful!

Timberwolf
08-13-2006, 02:59 PM
Thanks Aussiegirl1, I'm glad you liked it.

Scorpio'sWill2Power
08-13-2006, 11:27 PM
Timberwolf, I can actually get a feel for the nature of
this poem by your words.

I've known the intensity of just this type of hunger,
desire, a sense of rightness of sharing with one
that feeds all the needs of mind, body and heart.

You explore with words and have genuine depth with
emotion in your work.

That's the mark of a true creator!!!

Nikita
08-14-2006, 06:31 AM
What a good dog. You are quite passionate throughout and at the end very eloquent about how you want to be treated as a submissive lover.

To me, that last paragraph is the most important and telling part of your vision, that a wolf cannot be truly tamed because there it would be less of a challenge to bring you to heel. IMO, it's a great description of a male switch.

prafful.143
08-14-2006, 06:33 AM
excellent niki....

Timberwolf
08-14-2006, 09:19 AM
Thank you all for your supportive words. It's good to know people enjoy what I have to offer.

cookiecat
08-14-2006, 11:43 AM
Now I see why you changed your signature. Your poem was intense and vivid - thank you for sharing.

Timberwolf
08-14-2006, 01:18 PM
Glad you liked it, cookiecat.

she_screams
08-19-2006, 04:32 PM
i loved it.
s_s

Timberwolf
08-19-2006, 08:31 PM
Thanks very much s_s.

Talia
09-01-2006, 08:03 PM
Finally had a chance to read this....very good job..very vivid. You do such wonderful work Timberwolf.

Timberwolf
09-01-2006, 08:31 PM
Thanks again S_B, I'm glad you're enjoying my works. It's always nice to know people got something out of it. :)

LadyFyreWolf
09-02-2006, 05:50 AM
Timberwolf, I certainly got something out of it. I can honestly say it's changed me.

Timberwolf
09-02-2006, 08:48 AM
Thank you Lady. For all your kind words.

IceAngel
09-02-2006, 11:02 PM
I have never been much into any kind of poetry or writing other then novels but i must say, i positively Loved that! :D

Timberwolf
09-02-2006, 11:38 PM
I'll take that as a pretty big compliment, IceAngel, glad you enjoyed it.

learningtopleez
10-22-2006, 11:39 PM
Oh wow Timberwolf! That spoke to me in so many ways! A very erotic, and intense poem! I especially loved this....


But to truly tame me is never what you wanted
If you’d wanted one that would only follow and never lead
You never would have chosen The Wolf

....because it reminds me of ropenhighheels and me....I too, would never have chosen him, if I only wanted one that would follow. *soft smile*

Thank you for changing your sig. line so that I could have the pleasure of reading your poetry!:)

moptop
10-23-2006, 01:54 AM
I love the way the interaction and balance between you both flows and changes, with your passion , as it rises - boils - subsides

Echoes
10-23-2006, 07:15 AM
very nicely written, I loved it, especially this part

But I am not finished yet
And I will not stop until I decide I am
Such a good dog

Your eyes grow desperate
My eyes grow hungry
:rose:

Timberwolf
10-23-2006, 10:30 AM
Thanks learningtopleez, moptop, and Echoes, I'm glad all three of you have enjoyed my work.

ropenhighheels
10-24-2006, 03:31 AM
Oh wow Timberwolf! That spoke to me in so many ways! A very erotic, and intense poem! I especially loved this....



....because it reminds me of ropenhighheels and me....I too, would never have chosen him, if I only wanted one that would follow. *soft smile*

Thank you for changing your sig. line so that I could have the pleasure of reading your poetry!:)

Nice work Timberwolf!

Very true statement ltp....you know I'll always be the one leading us! ;)

elyse
10-24-2006, 07:18 AM
"You buck, and slide, and try to escape
But I am not finished yet
And I will not stop until I decide I am"

ohhhhh, baby.....

i, um, i mean... remarkable imagery coupled with an undeniable rhythm that connects on a visceral level.... mmmm.... coupled.... undeniable.... visceral.... ohh...

*accusingly* no fair! you turned my brain off!

Timberwolf
10-24-2006, 08:41 AM
ropenhighheels - I thouhgt you might enjoy this. :)

elyse - Turning off your wonderful brain is no small achievement. *Takes a bow*

Valkyrie402
11-25-2006, 07:45 PM
A Goddess deserves to have a pet such as you..........amazing and beautiful poem....lucky Lady...

Timberwolf
11-25-2006, 08:19 PM
I'm glad you feel that way Valkyrie. Thank you very much.

TheDeSade
11-25-2006, 09:45 PM
TW. . . you have convinced me that I am a poor imitation of a poet. I am continually amazed at the quality of the work that is posted here. . . thank you for sharing.

Timberwolf
11-25-2006, 10:08 PM
I think you do not do yourself enough credit. ;-)