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violetgem
08-22-2006, 02:37 PM
I cry out at your touch
My body lets go,
The pain that you cause
Rekindles the pleasure below.

My arms and legs are tied down
Pinned by our love,
I bite into the gag
As I feel my adrenalin run.

Each time the whip hits me
I scream at the pain,
But the pain that you give me
Drives every bit of me insane.

Insane like I need,
Insane like I crave,
A pleasure I could find no where else
A pleasure you alone made.

Some might say they don’t understand this desire
The love magnified from my screams,
Years ago I wouldn’t have understood either
But I know this is what I now need.

Sweat drips off my body
I tremble as your eyes meet mine,
I never knew such a love existed
I never knew someone could be so perfect in my mind.

Your hand caresses my skin
Inching over every part,
I moan as you touch the marks you made
You smile because you know you have my heart.

My body will ache for sometime
Reminding me of your love,
But I know I will sleep in ecstasy tonight
Your body incasing me like a glove.

You undo my binds so slowly
I savor the position I’m in,
But it’s not the position that matters
It’s the warmth I feel as your love burns through my skin.

You help me up and hold me tight
Your kiss still takes my breath away,
It’s a miracle I ever found you
I treasure our love more each and every day.

Timberwolf
08-23-2006, 03:10 PM
I tried to reply earlier but the system wasn't having any of it. But anyway, good job, I hope you keep writing.

Gr1m'sGirl
08-23-2006, 04:38 PM
Beautiful! I love it. Keep on writing. :]

Violenteer
08-25-2006, 09:58 PM
like this part the most...

Insane like I need,
Insane like I crave,
A pleasure I could find no where else
A pleasure you alone made.

keep it up! :)

violetgem
08-27-2006, 12:03 PM
Thanks for reading it, happy you three enjoyed :)

pinkme
10-18-2006, 04:01 PM
I enjoyed it too violetgem.

frankee
10-18-2006, 08:56 PM
That was so beautiful violetgem.

Warbaby1943
10-19-2006, 07:48 AM
I liked it too. You have a lovely way with words. Thanks.

violetgem
11-09-2006, 12:01 AM
aw thank you all!!! I love when I can create something that people can feel.

moptop
11-09-2006, 03:47 AM
A nice mix of love and sex, pleasure and pain. I like

"My arms and legs are tied down
Pinned by our love"

a lot

TheDeSade
11-09-2006, 02:04 PM
well done. I like it because it is straighforward and in pretentious. It doesn't try to be anything but what it is which is to me, an intense announcement of the passion and the love in your relationship.

Echoes
01-11-2015, 04:44 PM
please come back and write for us some more
I miss your words