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Daes
08-23-2006, 05:19 PM
This.. kinda went in between erotic and non, but I think its fine here.


Metal Breathes

Whispers tantalize every sense
The cold brutality of passion
Make me cry and beg for more
While waiting for you to take it away
Close my eyes and breathe

Bind me tight with razorblade kisses
Your eyes confine me to a cage
A deadlock of undefined metallic romance
I’ll wait for you and let time dissipate
Close your eyes and let me breathe

I’ll love you to break me
With care in your touch
Every notion entwined in heated caresses
A love as quick as a blade
I’ll bear my mark just to breathe

Chains tight like snakes loving me
Show the beauty of loyalty
I’ll cry for you, just let me breathe
Of a love drowning in your command
I’ll bleed for you… it’s my release

Sir_G
08-23-2006, 11:31 PM
Sublime.

Timberwolf
08-25-2006, 08:35 AM
Quite excellent work.

Daes
08-26-2006, 07:47 PM
Thank you, its appreciated

Rabbit1
08-26-2006, 08:09 PM
great thanks for sharing it