A New Day

[Rabbit1]

A New Day
By Rabbit1





The sun has risen and
Life has given me another day
To be thankful for your love
Although far away

Built on trust our
Relationship is sound
Strengthen with love
That is newly found

Promises made
Until death do us part
The love is given
In the form of our heart

The love is simple
Full and pure
And no problems are there
It can not cure

We opened out hearts
And invited each other in
So together we stand
And together we will win

As we work together
Our problems a test
Our love will still be standing
Despite their best

With our eyes on each others
And working as one
All problems will vanish
Like the setting sun

Facing our problems
And not backing away
Will lead to another
Wonderful day

Each day is special
Each beat of our heart
For together we will stand
And never part


Love filled our lives
And busted our shell
Made it worth living
Got rid of our hell

Pieces were missing
From our lives for a time
Now we found each other
And can correct that crime

When mistakes were made
As most young people do
But we found each other
And our love is true

Is love the answer
Is it really the key
I was meant for you
Like you were meant for me

So the answer is simple
And our love is true
All you have to do is love me
As much as I love you

[Timberwolf]

Hey bossman, that's good stuff there. I enjoyed that.

[Gr1m'sGirl]

Very nice.. Keep writing!!

<3Fae

[dzire2pleeze]

awwwww .....that's so sweet

[MsUther]

A lovely text that surpriced me. I enjoyed seeing, for me atleast, a new side of you.
Thanks for posting.

[Silke]

That was beautiful, Rabbit...thanks for sharing. :)

[Rabbit1]

A lovely text that surpriced me. I enjoyed seeing, for me atleast, a new side of you.
Thanks for posting.


thanks ---I am rather complex---lol until you get to know me ---lol

[Sir_G]

You complex pah! Great poem Rabbit made me feel good and set me up for the day.

[Warbaby1943]

Rabbit that was great. I sure said a lot in just those few words.

[Rabbit1]

Thanks ---the whole intent of it was to make people feel good ---my other side ---is a hopeless romantic I guess ----

[mina]

Awww that was sweet :)

[Widget]

wow the soft and fuzzy side to the rabbit...who would have guessed. I enjoyed it as well. It's nice when men can say things like that as well. It gives us women hope for the oposite sex. hehe.

Well done

[Rabbit1]

wow the soft and fuzzy side to the rabbit...who would have guessed. I enjoyed it as well. It's nice when men can say things like that as well. It gives us women hope for the oposite sex. hehe.

Well done

Thanks Widget ---speaking for only one of the opposite sex ---I can say I am glad you think there is hope for us ---lol

but really it takes a secure man to say what he feels ---as most men are taught from a early age to hide their feelings----that feelings are something for women ---lol

[ladywrites]

lovely... sweet and simple.

[Talia]

Now, you've done it! You let everyone see the softer side of you. Now there will be havoc in the streets and chaos everywhere.

Seriously Rabbit..that was wonderful. This really shows the softer side of you. I'm not suprizied others were suprized at the softer side. I was when we first talked. The rough and tough Rabbit is a actually a cute cuddle bunny that just needed some attentions....lol aaahnneemmmm sorry..had to do that. ;)

SB

[isabeau6]

Thanks ---the whole intent of it was to make people feel good ---my other side ---is a hopeless romantic I guess ----

that poem reached out and touched me deep inside..almost as if you already knew me...i love it..you have such a way with words..as i've already found out...touches me to the core...

[moptop]

Aaaaawwww, Rabbit, now I feel all mushy. That was lovely!

[thrall]

very very good..........

I see that you are happy.......and it warms the heart