The Need

[Violenteer]

OK. This is on the fly. But I'll give it a go:

I saw in you the need to be hurt
The need to be used
Prostrate in devotion
Straining against the pain
Crying for me this river of dreams
Building for me this bridge of sighs
You told me so
An I believed before I new
The crack of leather on skin
The marks left within

[Silke]

*sighs* I love it...

[Talia]

Very nice....

[poetic_justice]

Great poem, please keep it up!