Black And Blue [Archive]

Violenteer

08-26-2006, 02:48 AM

Black and blue.
Being with you is like that too.
Cold and hard
The heat in the steel.
The animal in the leather.
Forged in the heat and bondage.
The anodized marks on the skin.
Chocolate tear stained eyes that look above.
More my master.
More!
I promise you!
So we battle the boundaries.
One moment of pain,
A shared term of eternity.
Take it in.
Take it all.
Plead, and give.
Give, and plead.
Worship me.
The way I worship you.
Push.
So that I may find you.

Timberwolf

08-26-2006, 08:22 AM

Very interesting piece.

Talia

09-01-2006, 08:18 PM

yes interesting indeed. Thanks for sharing.

poetic_justice

09-02-2006, 03:47 AM

Nicely put, thankyou.

pinkme

10-18-2006, 03:59 PM

loved it

frankee

10-19-2006, 11:00 AM

WOW! That was great Violenteer

ElectricBadger

10-20-2006, 05:05 AM

Really nice, well done! I loved the images...."Chocolate tear'....

gagged_Louise

10-21-2006, 08:08 AM

Very good, Violenteer, I like the stark quality of it.

Echoes

10-23-2006, 07:23 AM

[QUOTE=Violenteer;103668]

Cold and hard
The heat in the steel.
The animal in the leather.
Forged in the heat and bondage.

QUOTE]

very nicely done

slaveangel{HM}

11-06-2006, 08:48 PM

Wow... *applaudes* A wonderful piece! Am surprised that I missed it earlier. Well done.

Violenteer

01-23-2007, 05:06 PM

hi everyone,

i have not been around for a while....so thankyou!

TheDeSade

01-23-2007, 05:30 PM

very nice. great images and an interesting flow to the whole piece. Have you considered entering it in the January Poetry Contest? I think you should!