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Uzukasai
08-26-2006, 03:05 AM
Okay its not really erotic but romantic, I originally wrote this in Japanese so bear with it not rhyming.

DEAD OF NIGHT
In the dead of night..
When silence is numb..
I lie awake and suffocate..
A distant bondage..
In smothered thoughts of you..
Your smile..
Your eyes..
The electric pulse of your touch..
You’re nothing I expected..
Yet everything I want..
The sound of your voice..
Calms my rattled nerves..
And makes me long all the more..
To obey, protect, and hold you in my arms again..
In the dead of night..
I lie awake..
Knowing reality is so much sweeter..
Than any dream could be..

Silke
08-26-2006, 03:59 AM
Wow, this is amazing!! And to know you write in Japanese as well...I'm impressed. :)

Timberwolf
08-26-2006, 08:08 AM
Bear with it? Hell, that was great stuff.

Uzukasai
08-26-2006, 12:29 PM
Thanks guys, I am actually pretty floored, I rarely share anything I write, so yeah, its cool to hear compliments. :)

ladywrites
08-26-2006, 03:58 PM
loved it... well done you ! joxx

Daes
08-26-2006, 07:57 PM
Awesome poem!! Seriously, good job ^_^

Uzukasai
08-27-2006, 02:05 AM
Thanks you two. ^^