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wingsofanangel
08-28-2006, 06:42 PM
Eyelashes weave lies of seduction
Angelic pout reminds of perfection
Heavy hand soft to the skin
Dancing fingers tumble within
Soft gasp surrenders ones emotion
Flushing cheeks enhance devotion
Aching
No release
Pleading
No release
Screaming
No Release
Groping, teasing, Feeling
Wild tangled matted hair
Soft whisper reminds you're there
Ruby and crimson grace supple thighs
Aurora tears line entrancing eyes
Body betrays ones stuborn mind
Trust broken limits you seek to find
Beating heart aches with lust
Mind, body, and soul given with trust
Yours fully
Yours Truely
Yours Lovingly
Complete giving of ones self
Yielding in affection
Finally release has come

8/28/06 B.K.R.

-Sera

Uzukasai
08-28-2006, 06:45 PM
Very nice Sera, very nice.

Timberwolf
08-28-2006, 07:26 PM
I really enjoyed that (I'm saying that a lot these days, but people here keep pumping out solid work!).

wingsofanangel
08-30-2006, 07:05 PM
thanks guys...

turns out all that stuff is mostly shit though.... I've recently discovered it just doesn't exist.. atleast not for me.

Anya

Rabbit1
08-31-2006, 03:19 AM
so lovely ----thanks for sharing it Love

cariad
08-31-2006, 06:09 AM
*Hugs* wings. For now take comfort in your friends, forgive and let time heal as it always does to a degree, and then one day when you are least expecting it I am sure someone special will be there for you.

cariad

Silke
08-31-2006, 07:28 AM
*adds another hug to the pile* Your feelings are still valid and true...and so well captured in the poem. I'm sure with time you'll find someone who deserves all that you give and everything that's you. Please, don't let one bad experience stop you from feeling this way, love. It's always worth any risk of getting hurt. :)

wingsofanangel
08-31-2006, 03:21 PM
thanks for liking it.

bah girls.. I dunno.. I just want to be bitter and cynical and angry right now.. its easier.. yanno? But I'll be okay :) thanks for the kind words I appreciate it.

Anya

Warbaby1943
08-31-2006, 05:16 PM
Good work.

Try to cheer up the day will come when you'll wish you hadn't wasted your time on anger. Your too good of a person and wise beyond your years to let anything get you down. Again, cheer up and smile for us and the camera.

poetic_justice
09-01-2006, 02:25 AM
That was a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it immensely.

wingsofanangel
09-01-2006, 02:45 PM
thank you both !!!!

I am doing much better than I thought I'd be doing :)