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Silke
09-02-2006, 03:03 PM
Like lightning out of blue skies
it is there
the hidden trap door.

I know it is waiting
so I watch my step
tread lightly, lass, stay in the light!

But the week unfolds in false calm
and I get careless
he will come, little girl, just one more day!

The hours crawl by
and the light fades
watch out, my love, don't fall!

My step hits the void
as the trap door opens
fight the darkness, Dara, trust in my love!

And reluctantly
I turn towards the light
hoping
it will lead the way back
save me from freezing alone in the dark
to last another day.

How much longer?

It's only Friday.

Warbaby1943
09-02-2006, 03:22 PM
Very nice silke. You do nicely with your foreign language - English - better than I could and it is my only one.

ladywrites
09-02-2006, 03:31 PM
Brilliant what a sense of foreboding

Silke
09-02-2006, 03:36 PM
Strangely enough...there are some things that come easier to me when I use English. Writing stories and poems are just two examples. Thanks for the compliment, WB. :)

By the way, I'm pretty sure you'd do wonderfully with your language skills - just dive right in...;)

Silke
09-02-2006, 03:38 PM
*smiles* thanks, ladywrites. :)

KermitsKeeper
09-02-2006, 04:19 PM
Awesome, Silke! I'll tell my frog this is here and make sure he sees it...

gagged_Louise
09-02-2006, 04:45 PM
Really good, Silke, you get the feeling that the things said are less crucial than the intangible stuff around the corner.

Just listening to a live recording of Led Zeppelin's The Rain Song - it's from their final German tour in 1980 - and it has the same restraint and gentle shifting between light and mellow darkness.

Silke
09-02-2006, 04:58 PM
*blushes*...she's bringing on the frog...run!! :eek:

Glad you liked it, Kate *hugs* :)

And I'll have to check out that song. *smiles* You're right, a shitload of intangible stuff around that corner, Louise. Thanks for your thoughts on this. :)

Talia
09-02-2006, 06:08 PM
I feel yeah Silke.....but your wait will end sooner than you think...he's coming.

No more trap doors to worry about.

love you

SB

Silke
09-02-2006, 06:21 PM
*hugs SB* I know...now. No more trap doors. :)

gagged_Louise
09-02-2006, 07:09 PM
Super Bitch: you mean somebody's cumming?

Talia
09-02-2006, 07:11 PM
Super Bitch: you mean somebody's cumming?

lol ;)

Silke
09-02-2006, 07:18 PM
hahahahahaha....now that would be a sudden change of mood. *giggles*

gagged_Louise
09-02-2006, 07:19 PM
"I know the Lord is coming soon, coming soon"

-from a notorious backward message included in the sound mix on Prince's Parade album. This is really equivocal.

Silke
09-02-2006, 07:42 PM
*giggles some more*