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master 327-834-200
09-03-2006, 06:05 AM
I opened my email today and found this. I had to share it with everyone who knows slave and I.

Please be kind and supportive because she writes from te heart and it makes me so proud to share not only her work with you all, but also our love for each other.

Thank you.

love lost in their truth
within limits, not ours
passion drowned by disillusion
two sinking flowers

New roots now entangled
reborn growing free
life reinvented
my lover and me

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Never that far
but fathoms between
our continents divided
by my own self esteem

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The sting in my tail
the spring in my step
the words to describe this
leave me feeling inept

the dawn to my day
the moon to my sun
the usual clichés
to name but a some

this feeling of need
this feeling of want
filling me up
in the places we haunt

so what does it mean?
this hunger inside
to feel satisfied
when your here by my side

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My words are so weak
to compare to my need
my words oh so meek
for the person you've freed

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KermitsKeeper
09-03-2006, 06:51 AM
Beautiful!

Timberwolf
09-03-2006, 09:03 AM
Sounds about right to me. :)

Silke
09-03-2006, 12:55 PM
*smiles* very beautiful...and it seems like you've freed a wonderful person. :)

slave327-834-200
09-03-2006, 01:02 PM
Thank you everyone for your kind words.

I never imagined for a minute when i drunkenly jotted these down lastnight and hit the send button that i would see them here! :eek:

Most of all thank you Master, you know what you have done for me to make me feel this way. I am touched that you want to share this for all to see. :)

Confessor_Ed
09-03-2006, 01:07 PM
I think I'm getting the point of poetry.
Confessor Ed