PDA

View Full Version : Time



LadyFyreWolf
09-03-2006, 08:13 AM
You meant it when you said it
With all your heart and soul
But Time has reared her stunning head
And changed your normal role

What you thought was right and good
Is counter to your will
For Time has turned your mind around -
You embrace a whole new thrill

Yesterday you lusted so
For women and their charms
But just a little Time has passed
Now your place is in MY arms

Then again, Time can be cruel
She takes away our hope
For everything we're living for
Hangs from a burning rope

We need to be as one right now
But Time has gone astray
She's killing us with her movements, slow
Until our perfect day

She giveth and She takes away
So many gifts and joys
Saw fit to give us one another
Then began her painful ploy

For we've waited an eternity
We've flourished and we've grown
And Time then turns Her hands around
To leave us all alone.

Timberwolf
09-03-2006, 08:59 AM
I liked it, a very good first piece to post. I hope you post more.

LadyFyreWolf
09-03-2006, 09:47 AM
Thank you! A little juvenile, I thought, but it was a sudden inspiration. A compliment from you, Timberwolf, feels like a gift. I appreciate it.

MsUther
09-03-2006, 01:08 PM
I really liked it, LadyFyreWolf, especially the last vers about time turning her hands around...very lovely put. Thank you for posting, and please bring more:)

Talia
09-03-2006, 06:53 PM
I agree very lovely put...it'a amazing time....very good..hope to see more..

Warbaby1943
09-03-2006, 07:45 PM
It was terrific. I hope you post more. It made a lot of sense too.

LadyFyreWolf
09-04-2006, 06:56 AM
Wow. I'm really flattered! I had no intention of posting a writing, never mind continuing. Thank you all so much for your words. Of late I've been given access to a very deep well of inspiration, so there may very well be more to come!

Warbaby1943
09-04-2006, 07:26 AM
Wow. I'm really flattered! I had no intention of posting a writing, never mind continuing. Thank you all so much for your words. Of late I've been given access to a very deep well of inspiration, so there may very well be more to come!
Can't wait. You did good.