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storm
09-04-2006, 01:22 AM
[Not really a poem, but was great fun to write. Just emailed it to someone I know, and thought I'd post it here. This is me in angry mode - hehe]

You’re words have come back to bite you huh?
‘I will make it better’
For years, holding me down
My own demons used to keep me
Far below reach of your king-like status
That’s your game,

Take them when they’re fucked up and scared
Before long;
Trapped under your spell
Needing you to save them
From themselves.

Well guess what
Fucker
I’m stronger than you think.
Your words have come back to bite you.
I will make it better.
You’re job is redundant.

Chris Martin is a pretentious little bastard.
I will never be yours to ‘fix’

Sir_G
09-04-2006, 02:28 AM
Cool. If a picture paints a thousand words your words certainly paint a picture, the subject of which looks like they're definately out of that particular picture. I like it.

Warbaby1943
09-04-2006, 07:33 AM
WOW strong feelings. Good way to say it though.

Talia
09-04-2006, 09:12 AM
I did one of these too...a few peoms back. I bet you felt better after writing this...especially after sending it. I know I did. Feel free to express those feelings. Peoms are always about sadness, and happyness. Ever read Daddy by Silvia Plath?.....great peom.....

Sb