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[Talia]

Ok, couldn't come up with a title for this one....hope you enjoy anyway.

SB

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by Super Bitch

My love sits and waits for you
You’ve gone with out much word
I’ll be back you say
My heartbreaks
Never wanting to be without

I’m here but must go again soon
Oh the pain of seeing you again
The hell I go thorough when you leave
I need you here

My darlin I am here…
Always, am I here for you
Even though I am not
In your heart I will always be

I cry when you leave
Not knowing when I will see you again
Knowing it’s always too long
But closer than I realize

My heartaches for you
The love for you never ending
The need for you growing stronger
Only laying dormant while you are gone

When the ocean of time brings you to me
I will love thee more, for I need you
Salvage the pain of your departure
With the presence, of you
That only you can heal

No one is able to heal me like you
Can I wait for you to come back when life lets you?
Yes, for you are the keeper of my soul
I wait with love and empty arms

[Silke]

My dear sis...I so feel your pain. May his healing touch make everything better. *big hugs*

I love it...the last two lines especially - what a strong image!! Wonderful! :)

[cariad]

Oh gosh SB - that was incredible. I am sure I have said somewhere else that I am not generally a poetry person; but just sometimes a poem touches me deep as that did, and well, to use unpoetic language, wow.

cariad

[Timberwolf]

Another fine piece from a fine woman.

[Talia]

*blushing* thank you for you kind words and Cariad, I don't know, but I don't think my poetry had that affect on people before...I'm glad this one did.

Wolf....thanks...your quite fine yourself ;)

Silke...your a wonderful sis....love yeah

SB

[Widget]

wow, I am speachless for this one and there is nothing I can say that will do it justice.

[storm]

Nice piece SB.

I know that poetry, much like music, is very personal, and can only ever really be interpreted correctly by the author (maybe that's why I love it so much)


I’m here but must go again soon
Oh the pain of seeing you again
The hell I go thorough when you leave
I need you here


But this meant something to me for sure.
I've only ever fallen once for someone overseas, and everytime we spoke, I'd find myself getting down well before the conversation was over, knowing it would end soon.

Whether or not that's what was meant there, but that's where your poem got me!

Very nice

[ladywrites]

Wow , full of yearning... excellent.

[slave327-834-200]

SB
This poem echoed through me, I understand your pain.
*sending you a huggle*

[Talia]

mmmm I can never get enough of those huggles......

[MsUther]

Such a heartbreaking poem. Makes my soul start aching.
Those times, when you are gutted...

Thank you for posting.
((((((((hugsss)))))))))

[Talia]

Well thank you MsUther, I'm glad this pulls strong responses...

I reread what I wrote...(one of those things you have to leave alone and then go back to) I'm kind of suprised myself....

[firmandconfident]

Very intense work of art... I sit and wonder who is your muse?

[Talia]

mmmmmmm *raising eyebrow* I'll never tell. ;)