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Aesop
09-07-2006, 11:19 AM
Frantic pacing and restless nights,
Endless spinning and roaming,
They bring the death of dreams.

I run from place to place,
Time to time,
And cannot find you.

I am jealous of the sun,
Of the moon and the stars,
Their light can touch you and I cannot.

I am lost within my choices,
My promises,
My life.

Silke
09-07-2006, 12:26 PM
I have a knot in my throat when I read this...thank you for sharing, Aesop.

I hope your loved ones feel your touch when looking at the same sun, moon and stars - and that you feel them close when they do. *hugs*

ladywrites
09-07-2006, 05:13 PM
ohhhhhhhhh just wonderful !

Talia
09-07-2006, 05:47 PM
*clearing throat* That was exceptional....I can feel your pain Aesop.


And cannot find you.


This is my nightmare

Thanks for sharing...your first? I think? This was wonderful.


SB

Warbaby1943
09-07-2006, 06:18 PM
Aesop another reason it's good to have you back.

LadyFyreWolf
09-07-2006, 06:29 PM
Oh, my gosh. Verbalizing some of my fears, too. Thank you for sharing.

Timberwolf
09-07-2006, 07:34 PM
Truly wonderful work.

Aesop
09-10-2006, 09:11 PM
Thank you all for the great comments.:)

likeafox
09-11-2006, 12:10 PM
wow I can really relate on a personal level, chilling.

MsUther
09-11-2006, 01:09 PM
Thank you, Aesop. So much.

Asia
09-11-2006, 03:02 PM
It's like you read my mind and put them into magical words - wonderful.
~kiss~
Asia
xxx