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Aesop
09-07-2006, 11:19 AM
Frantic pacing and restless nights,
Endless spinning and roaming,
They bring the death of dreams.
I run from place to place,
Time to time,
And cannot find you.
I am jealous of the sun,
Of the moon and the stars,
Their light can touch you and I cannot.
I am lost within my choices,
My promises,
My life.
Silke
09-07-2006, 12:26 PM
I have a knot in my throat when I read this...thank you for sharing, Aesop.
I hope your loved ones feel your touch when looking at the same sun, moon and stars - and that you feel them close when they do. *hugs*
ladywrites
09-07-2006, 05:13 PM
ohhhhhhhhh just wonderful !
Talia
09-07-2006, 05:47 PM
*clearing throat* That was exceptional....I can feel your pain Aesop.
And cannot find you.
This is my nightmare
Thanks for sharing...your first? I think? This was wonderful.
SB
Warbaby1943
09-07-2006, 06:18 PM
Aesop another reason it's good to have you back.
LadyFyreWolf
09-07-2006, 06:29 PM
Oh, my gosh. Verbalizing some of my fears, too. Thank you for sharing.
Timberwolf
09-07-2006, 07:34 PM
Truly wonderful work.
Aesop
09-10-2006, 09:11 PM
Thank you all for the great comments.:)
likeafox
09-11-2006, 12:10 PM
wow I can really relate on a personal level, chilling.
MsUther
09-11-2006, 01:09 PM
Thank you, Aesop. So much.
It's like you read my mind and put them into magical words - wonderful.
~kiss~
Asia
xxx