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Dragon's muse
09-10-2006, 07:49 AM
Respecting truth,
i cannot say Your coming
transformed,
within the twinkling of an eye,
the dreary world into a place of beauty--
where stars were pins
to hang the rainbows by.

No song of splendour burst upon the instant
You shyly,
for the first time,
touched my lips;
nor did the cares and worries,
ever pressing,
flee at the pressure of Your fingers.

Yet, loving truth,
i must in truth remember
how,
with Your coming,
life seemed newly filled
with more of hope
and
less of routine burdens;
within myself the old revolt was quite stilled.

Nor can i forget how You --
firmly,
surely
with steady hand
opened faith's closed door

that i,
serene,
might gaze
into bright shadow
where only
darkened sunlight was before.

Warbaby1943
09-10-2006, 09:27 AM
Very nice.

Timberwolf
09-10-2006, 10:41 AM
A very truthful poem, I like it.

Talia
09-10-2006, 05:35 PM
very nice....I love the title....Bright Shadow! Excellent!