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likeafox
09-11-2006, 10:33 AM
A wire tears at my flesh
restrained, someone looks over me
blinded, but all I see is darkness
soiled, I am no longer fresh
scared, now spread for all to see
beaten, whipped brings a cry of distress
forced, I must swallow but still plea
insanity, in my mind all I can do is regress

This seems a little dark but that was just my mood at the moment. Hope to post allot more in the future. Better give me positive reviews I'm not good with criticism. :30:

Love and pain
Likeafox

Silke
09-11-2006, 11:17 AM
phew, strong stuff....I like it! Thanks for sharing, likeafox. :)

moonofagony
09-11-2006, 12:15 PM
wow thats intense, ive enjoyed readin it.

Talia
09-11-2006, 07:33 PM
yes liked it very much..thank you for sharing..hope to see more

MsUther
09-12-2006, 02:04 AM
Yes, very intense. I liked it a lot, Likafox. Please share more of your words with us :)

Desperadosong
09-12-2006, 01:27 PM
wow... intense only chips the tip of the iceburg. Touching words, thank you for sharing them with us!!

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