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Timberwolf
09-14-2006, 07:05 PM
A double shot from the dark side. Enjoy.

Pulse

With every beat it courses through me
A desire I must fulfill
Every time I look at you it grows stronger
And your scent is making me hungry

I must have it
You cannot deny me
I pulse for you

Your skin so soft and warm
I press into you
Your body writhes underneath my form
Only spurring me onward more

I must have it
You cannot deny me
I pulse for you

You moan out with every touch
Unable to struggle
And so I take my fill of your warmth
Filling you with the cold of night

I must have it
You cannot deny me
I pulse for you

The cold fills you up inside
You become calm
As the heat of your core feeds me anew
Now as one we are joined

I must have it
You cannot deny me
I pulse for you

And you for me


*****


Be Careful What You Wish For

You say you want to be helpless
Bound and captured
Held a prisoner in the darkness
Not knowing when the light will return

Be careful what you wish for

You say you want to be marked
Forced to endure
Skin turned red at the furious touch
To bear the mark of the beast

Be careful what you wish for

You say you want to be hunted
Held down to the ground
Seen as they prey to be captured
Pierced by the hunter

Be careful what you wish for

Be careful what you wish for
I’m coming for you

Talia
09-14-2006, 07:58 PM
ohh shivers ran down my spine at the last stanza....You do have a wonderful way of writing and capturing the hearts of your reader. When I log on I wonder, what's Timberwolf written today...I'm never let down when I read what you write. Thank you for sharing with us.

SB

Timberwolf
09-14-2006, 08:07 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words, S_B. (I just can't type out "bitch" for you, because you're just not! :) )

Talia
09-14-2006, 08:35 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words, S_B. (I just can't type out "bitch" for you, because you're just not! :) )
:bigkiss:

MsUther
09-15-2006, 02:35 AM
Lovely lovely poems, Timberwolf. especially the last one got to me.... oooh my!

Warbaby1943
09-15-2006, 03:15 AM
Nice poems again TW. Keep it up - the writing, that is.

StillBehindBlueEyes
09-29-2006, 08:45 PM
Be careful what you wish for
I’m coming for you

Ummmm, that second poem, oh my.
Makes me think hard, sends shivers through me, makes me want to run and laugh at the same time.

Timberwolf
09-29-2006, 08:51 PM
Glad you all enjoyed them.

lily27
09-30-2006, 08:44 AM
*gets ready*

hehehe

I agree with everyone above. The first was very good. The second was HOT.

whew!


-lily

Timberwolf
09-30-2006, 10:57 AM
Thanks as always my friendly incorrigible one. ;)

TomOfSweden
09-30-2006, 11:04 AM
That last one was really good. And clever. I like clever poetry. Not so arty farty, but a hell of a lot more fun to read.

Timberwolf
09-30-2006, 12:10 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Tom.

mina
10-01-2006, 07:12 PM
Mmm good poems... "you cannot deny me" and "to bear the mark of the beast" were my favorite lines, got me all excited hehe :)

Timberwolf
10-02-2006, 11:36 AM
Glad I could add some excitement to your day Mina. :)

frankee
10-02-2006, 09:11 PM
i loved them both TW, but 'Pulse' was my favorite, got me a little revved up *blushing*

caligirl{Rob}
10-03-2006, 05:30 PM
I absolutely LOVED both! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
hugs and licks!
cali

Timberwolf
10-03-2006, 05:49 PM
Thanks frankee and caligirl, I'm glad you both enjoyed it.

Curious_1
10-04-2006, 10:33 PM
damn Twolf, you are good!!! I shivered :)

Timberwolf
10-05-2006, 08:59 AM
Glad I could send a little jolt up your spine. :)

Echoes
10-18-2006, 07:10 AM
I absolutely loved them both...repeated echoes from posted above, I always say to myself in hushed whisper "be careful what you wish for" yet with catched breath thinking...one day.

moptop
10-21-2006, 04:04 PM
Wow. Yes. Be Careful what You Wish For - superb. Wow some more. And oof, too, I think.

Valkyrie402
11-25-2006, 07:50 PM
My stomach is churning with the thrill of the chase....makes one want to be hunted...and caught...!

Timberwolf
11-25-2006, 08:17 PM
Thank you Echoes, moptop, and Valkyrie for all your kind words. :)

Valkyrie402
12-02-2006, 08:40 PM
Mmmmm..... I know these were written a while ago, but who would've thought you could be so inside my head....?!

I really love these... :)