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Scorpio'sWill2Power
09-17-2006, 03:49 AM
Time's faded dream, the mansion now derelict. Our backdrop
In this passion play. The air heavy with the energy of restless
spirits. Bound to this place by chains both rusted real and spectral.
All about me I'm surrounded with that essence which is you.

Locked in a lover's embrace, nestled upon the fresh wet earth.
Exploring One another. Tongues entwined, taking each others
Breath within us.

Pinning me down your hips encircle mine. Your mate scent ripe,
feral in nature as you brush the silken wetness over me.
Fingers interlaced, captive in your embrace. Palms touching as
the earth beneath us devours our hands.

My eyes searching your body, watching pink hued nipples
stiffen in morning's soft breeze. The fiery curls of your
mound, matted. Glistening diamond droplets weeping over my
loins, searing my flesh with your desire.

The curve of my lips between your teeth, nicking tender flesh.
Raising yourself above the carnal spear, you hunger for its
incision. Arrow point stabbing at your crimson bud. Seeking
release within the velvet wetness of your quill.

I shudder, intoxicated by your liquid spice. Your urgent
swoop enfolding the lustful spire of your creation. The
fragrant earth strained between your pearl white toes
seeking purchase.

Domination reign over me, taking what has always been yours
since time began. Hypnotic movement of your hips, like waves
crashing over this human shore. Soul surrender, mind and
body declare as one.

Your sacred temple, my safe haven. I feel your bliss, your
sultry release wash over me. Shuddering atop me, each breath
like tiny deaths keening from your breast. My submission complete.
Life's essence fused within you, thundering deep and viscous.

Drawing earth's magic from this haunted place we succumb to
our desires, this talisman created. Our union most perfect in its
simplistic design. Our eyes searching each others spirit, joined in this harmonic balance of love and time.
Forever and a day.

MsUther
09-17-2006, 01:12 PM
What a wonderfull poem, Master of mine. I have missed your words here on the site, and reading this lovely text made me so happy. A rich story, full of love and passion. You are so beautiful, dearest Jeff. Thank you for posting this and sharing it with us all. :11_2_102:

Timberwolf
09-17-2006, 03:25 PM
Great stuff, thanks for posting.

likeafox
09-18-2006, 06:38 PM
Truly beautiful, I was completely enthralled by it

Talia
09-18-2006, 06:50 PM
As always Jeff, your writting is captivating. Thank you for posting this here.

SB

Nikita
09-21-2006, 06:42 AM
Sorry it took so long for me to catch up. As usual, your words paint a picture. It was a pleasure to read.

Nikita

mina
10-01-2006, 07:46 PM
Beautiful! Such amazing detail and imagery.

Warbaby1943
10-02-2006, 08:01 AM
Wow I could almost feel I was there. What a wonderful writing.

frankee
10-06-2006, 10:00 PM
That was incredible!

selkie
10-10-2006, 07:52 AM
imagry crisp, sensuous and so clear .... lovely lovely poem

frankee
10-10-2006, 09:38 AM
i enjoyed it so much i had to comeback and read it again:)