one must learn

[likeafox]

A haiku


Fear not the master
The whip only stings to teach
absents is your fear

This would be my first try on a haiku, please let me now how to better it.
I’m not sure its erotic but ehh depends how you decipher it.

[slaveangel{HM}]

The whip only stings to teach
(absence/absent) is your fear...


I really love this haiku poem. Strong message and lesson.
Thanks for sharing.

[Talia]

I do like this...very good. I can't think of anything I would change except what incredulous pointed out.

Keep going with this.