One

[elyse]

another Iron Poet commission, this time from Qmoq. his mystery words: agony, desire, touch

the form is the star here; i've chosen the Fibonacci, in which the number of syllables in each line is the sum of the syllables in the two previous lines...

ONE

One
glance;
one touch:
all You need
or will ever need
to arouse within my body
this cataract of desire untold, unimagined.
'Tis sweet agony, this anticipation of my inevitable surrender.

-- elyse

[Timberwolf]

Another fine effort. Short but very sweet, and says so much. You have a way with words I really admire.

[TomOfSweden]

Best one so far. I thought it was great.

[Talia]

you did very well...Very nicely done.

[frankee]

i loved the 'One' elyse. You are incredibly talented, looking forward to reading more:)

[cookiecat]

i can only restate what everyone else has said - you are very knowledgeable, talented and so very intriguing with your words. i've read each of your poems & look forward to reading more. thank you!

cookiecat

[caligirl{Rob}]

just WOW again! smiles
cali

[SheepishJaina]

Elyse you are so very talented. I wish I were only half the writer ye are!