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collapseduniverse{T}
10-02-2006, 09:31 PM
When he leaves
I silently beg for his return
No need to speak aloud
I know he hears
His words whisper in my ear
Echo deep
Strokes me with no hands
Yet I feel
As I sit alone
I need him near
Feel him
But I nervously fear that
He's gone for good
lily27
10-02-2006, 10:18 PM
Wow. That moved me.
Excellent work.
caligirl{Rob}
10-02-2006, 10:22 PM
Wow!! Very touching! hugs and licks!!!
Timberwolf
10-02-2006, 10:23 PM
I think those words must ring so true for many who have had an online relationship. A very good piece, thanks for posting it.
slaveangel{HM}
10-03-2006, 02:48 AM
*hugs* This poem speaks to me on many levels. Thankyou so much for sharing this with us. xx
Talia
10-03-2006, 02:52 AM
My hearts cry! Very well done. Hope to see more.
collapseduniverse{T}
10-03-2006, 02:57 AM
thank you guys, i love posting here, because i love your feedback.
Twister(cu)
10-03-2006, 09:43 PM
My beautiful pet.......thats wonderful........
thank you ....
you are such a wonderful pet...
Twister(cu)
Flaming_Redhead
10-04-2006, 08:51 PM
You've captured my sentiments exactly!