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Timberwolf
10-03-2006, 10:51 PM
This is a silly, but heartfelt little effort done for lily26. She handed me an Iron Poet challenge to write about her using the words "Sweet Lily Sunshine". And so I did. I liked her words enough to make them the title by themselves. It ain't Shakespeare, but I hope it makes you smile.

Sweet Lily Sunshine

Sweet Lily Sunshine, she’s so fine
Oh I’d like to spank her all the time
With hand or paddle or whip or cane
She’s a hot sub girl with a brain

A bit of a devil, a bit of a minx
A bit of an angel who can make you think
She’s got lots of question but she’s got answers too
Look out in the chat or she might auction you

She’s funny and smart but she’s got sex appeal
If you touch her just right then you might make her squeal
She’s also been known to squirm on occasion
Her dog ate her vibe, which caused her much frustration

She’s one of the best and I call her a friend
On our own journeys, helping hands do we lend
I think she’s tremendous, her friendship is mine
I wrote this for her, my Sweet Lily Sunshine

lily27
10-03-2006, 10:57 PM
*whipes a tear from my eye*

So beautiful. And hilarious. I can't believe how accurately you summed me up in only four verses.

Thank you, my friend.

*collapses into giggles*

-lily

Timberwolf
10-03-2006, 10:59 PM
I'm really glad you liked it babe, that's all that relaly matters. :)

SheepishJaina
10-03-2006, 11:08 PM
Very nice Twolf. I was smiling till the line about lily's dog. Then i was laughing out loud. :)

sparkler
10-03-2006, 11:11 PM
wonderful tribute to our sweet lily

elyse
10-03-2006, 11:25 PM
Funny, and sweet, and sexxxy, just like my hypothetical lezbo love-lemur lily!

Timberwolf
10-03-2006, 11:28 PM
Thanks everyone for the feedback. :)

"hypothetical lezbo love-lemur "

And to you I hand out a special gold star for that phrase. :D

MsUther
10-04-2006, 12:32 PM
That was so funny and cute :D

Timberwolf
10-04-2006, 02:02 PM
Thanks MsUther. :)

Curious_1
10-04-2006, 06:19 PM
Timberwolf

You summed up lily very well! That was very sweet and funny.

Curi

Timberwolf
10-04-2006, 06:22 PM
Well Curi I know as chat room moderator you've had plenty of chances to view lily's unique talents for yourself. :)

lily27
10-04-2006, 06:30 PM
Hmph!!!

Curious_1
10-04-2006, 06:39 PM
yes I have Twolf. She brings lots of fun and laughter to our group.

lily27
10-04-2006, 06:55 PM
*blushes*

Talia
10-08-2006, 12:43 PM
Now, this as cute. Thanks Timberwolf for sharing your thoughts about lily

Timberwolf
10-08-2006, 10:34 PM
Thanks Talia. It may not be my most artistic work, but it made a lot of people smile and that's probably much more important. :)