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Mack_Bolan{lily}
10-04-2006, 07:13 PM
You stand there with your ivory skin glowing in the moonlight
I look my breath frozen in my throat at the sight
There are no words for the beauty of your submission
Your breasts move as you breath in your constriction
The bonds that hold you are tight and unforgiving

I feel your heat as I move around to tantalise
Wrapped up in this shadow guise
A touch here a carress there
You whimper and moan as I pull your hair
Your eyes mist over with lust

The flame hovers above you its heated secretion hangs in the air
Then lands on a rose bud so pretty and fair
A sharp intake of breath and another drop falls
Searing the twin you arch and you call
More please more and I smile

I move to you now as you plead
I plunge into you feeling my boiling seed
You cry out in ecstacy as you strain against your bonds
So beautiful in the throws as I pump into your mons
Together we explode shattering as we do

Then we fade to shadow a memory in the Masters mind.

Flaming_Redhead
10-04-2006, 09:03 PM
:exellent1

To borrow a line from a friend of mine, you made my bits tingle! :hubba:

lily27
10-04-2006, 09:31 PM
Wow.

What else is there to say?

ummm....more? please??

-lily

lily27
10-04-2006, 09:32 PM
And welcome to the forums.

elyse
10-05-2006, 07:50 AM
More please more and I smile

Oh, yes! More? Please? More?

frankee
10-05-2006, 09:22 AM
WOW...is what comes to mind! Quite possibly a hose to cool me down as well:)

Timberwolf
10-05-2006, 03:27 PM
Very cool poem, hope you've got more where that came from. :)

Mack_Bolan{lily}
10-05-2006, 05:32 PM
Thank you all for your very kind words. With praise like that from the talented people here how can I not get off my butt and write more.

slaveangel{HM}
10-06-2006, 12:15 AM
A truly beatiful and sensual piece. Thankyou so much for sharing this with us. xx

Talia
10-08-2006, 01:01 PM
Very good poem. Your first two lines catch your reader....very good indeed.