Iron Poet Challenge

[elyse]

Just like the "Iron Chef" cooking show, but with words instead of food! :)

Rules:

1. use the three (3) challenge words below in a poem. Variations are allowed (example: if the word is 'walk', then walks, walked or walking would be acceptable)

2. the first person to post a completed poem then posts three new challenge words and, if desired, a poetic form (free verse, sonnet, sestina, etc)

have fun!

Challenge Words: collar, nibble, twilight

~ elyse

[violetgem]

I hope I am playing this right *fingers crossed*

He saw the twilight in her eyes
Her tears danced along her cheeks,
Her heart was pumping fast
His name was in every beat.
He claimed what was his
As he licked her cheeks dry,
He gently nibbled and pulled on her lip
Breathing into her the words “you are mine”.
He traced his fingers along her neck
Noticing how her collar hugged her tight,
They both knew she belonged to him
And to them both, nothing could be more right.



challenge words: Forbidden, ease, trust

[elyse]

you've played perfectly! Congratulations to violetgem, our first Iron Poet Challenge winner!!!

ps. great challenge words, too :)

[violetgem]

YAY!!!!! Go me!!!! hehe, thanks elyse!!! :)

[frankee]

That was a great poem violetgem.

i'm leaving this thread to the poets and writers. :)

[fedexguy]

ok, I always wanted to try Haiku, so thanks for the opportunity, if I'm judged as Iron worthy, I'll post my new challenge words in a little while

zipper slides with ease
he trusted her sense of touch
forbidden dance starts

[Moth]

there was a young woman called Sybill,who,
loved to give her own nipples a nibble
in daylight or moonlight, by candle or twighlight,no matter
as long as the bondage was too tight.
chain-cuffs and collar, would all make her holler, and ,
in her excitement she'd come with a clatter.

Moth

[delight{DTT}]

OMG violet that was amazing!!! keep it up! you gave me goose bumps

[fedexguy]

CHALLENGE words:
radiant
Mistress
sensual

I'm assuming most of you will understand to whom my award is dedicated to with my choice of words

[Flaming_Redhead]

LOL I love it, Moth!

[violetgem]

Her touch was filled with warmth
Giving him pleasure like no one could,
It was a sensual touch of pain and pleasure
That only they understood.

He craved his Mistresses eyes on him
They were more radiant than the sun,
Every time she gazed his way
His body flushed with blood.

He opened up his body and soul
And she received him with open arms,
A bond grew between them tighter then any rope
And it was a bond worth holding on.


challenge words: fear, sleep, comfort

[Radiance]

Looks @fedex..very sweet,purrsssssssssss

[Timberwolf]

fear, sleep, comfort

The fear in your eyes now passed
Your body trusting of my hand
As I bring upon you
Those things you dare not speak aloud

Beside you we shall drift to sleep
Into a land of dreams
I've given you the comfort of my protection
In enxhange I have the passion of your release

New words - Pulse, Quiver, Embrace

[mina]

Pulse, Quiver, Embrace

Your pulse was quickened as I traced
My yearning lips by what was mine
Your ruptured flesh with brimming wine
Quivering for one last embrace.

Challenge Words: beast, dusk, burn

[SheepishJaina]

Looks like fun folks!

[Talia]

oh my....I think I'm going to have to jump in on this thread when I get the time. Very nice imprompto poems.

[violetgem]

wow, love your poems Timberwolf and mina!!! Timberwolf, I love how yours ends, I always have trouble pulling it together in the end, but you seem to have no problem with it :)

[Uncle_Ed]

Challenge Words: beast, dusk, burn

At midday the black beast slumbered in the dank cave
Its obsidian wings folded o'er the hero's grave.
His body smashed, a burnt-out husk.
The monster waits til almost dusk
to walk down to the tar-pit tarn.
It pauses by the old wood barn
Scents the wind, feels it turn
Knowledge emerges and memories burn
their way to guide it, give it reason.
The winter approches. The killing season.

Challenge words: silk serpentine meadow

[cariad]

Shivvers as I read it, but then notices the reason for editing.....and makes a note for future reference....

[violetgem]

Uncle_Ed, your words always move me

[gagged_Louise]

His voice as sweet as silk and wine
brought us to this golden meadow
for joys he left unsaid - oh
the pleasure to be one called "mine".

Down the glowing dusky line
of a footpath shining pink and blue
I hurried through the dark, to say anew
I was his slut. He met me by the Serpentine

Amongst the grass so velveteen
I faced Master, who on the phone
had promised me "It won't be seen"

He came forth and kissed me to the bone
then promised to brand me in between
my privates. "so you, my dear, won't be blown

off course, and will always know who's your Own."


-The Serpentine of course is the lake in Hyde Park, London.

Challenge words: hard, blindfold, sing.

[elyse]

excellent use of imagery!

[Timberwolf]

Challenge words: hard, blindfold, sing.

Tied to the hard bench
You wail, you wail
The whip it does slither and flail

Wearing my blindfold
You boil, you boil
Your skin turning red from the toil

Under my command
You sing, you sing
Music in my ears does ring

Your body a treasure
A toy, a toy
Tonight you do all for this boy

New words: Quiet, jump, alive

[àiteag]

Quietly under a half light sky,
One dances to an unheard melody,
Oh, fear this one's trajedy.

Jumping through the ringing song,
The morning of those long past,
For it could never go too fast.

Singing up to those ears so high,
For those before, For the tithe(said "t-ive"),
To one's safe and alive.

Challenge Words: Paper, Tight, Heart

[RickBulow74]

To pull off the biggest caper,
The thieves had to steal a certain PAPER
They got to the site
but saw that security was TIGHT
and the HEART to do it began to taper


Challenge Words: Disability, bus, computer

[elyse]

What is disability
but simply another limit?
We all have them --
you, and i,
and all who have gone before us.

That girl
sitting across from me
on the bus
may shy from that
in which you revel

That hard-eyed man
in the cafe
may hesitate
even refuse
to give me what i
crave

And so we embark
upon our quests
to grow
to learn
to understand
which of our limits
are adamantine
and which
will one day melt
like frost
upon on a windowpane
when caressed
by the morning sun.

And
in the meantime
by the soft glow
from the computer
are we all,
if only for a moment,
made whole.

Challenge words: velvet, granite, autumn

[violetgem]

Looking through my window my vision starts to blur
I just accepted what I was seeing and now the seasons change,
Trees loose their protection, their leaves turn frail,
Exposing them to gazing eyes,
Each autumn it happens, but they never seem prepared,
The comfort zone of summers over
Leaving them open and exposed
No one offers them a mask, a costume and a bag for treats,
They can’t go knocking door to door
Hiding from defeat.
I turn within, my safety is gone,
I feel silly with a mask
Maybe I’m not prepared as I thought I was
As I stand naked and on view,
My protection is dying, my world not stable
Nothing is what I knew.
Looking past my feet, the ground once seemed so hard
But now I see it cracking
I was told it never would,
A lie that breaks me, I balanced on those words
The pure form was manipulated
You can’t turn granite into wood,
It doesn’t make sense, and yet I believed
Standing unsteady on what I thought was strong
Scared to move, scared to breath,
Petrified to continue on.
Emotions I thought I would never feel
Ravish through my blood,
Never exposed to them before
I am soft,
Scared,
With no where to run.
People painted me a picture
On a canvas considered gold
Stains wash out of cotton
The canvas used was velvet, and they hold.
Looking through my window anger starts to build
The trees out there
With another chance,
Spring will come and that they know,
The seasons of my life aren’t predictable
The stains within me will never fade,
All they will do is grow.


words: pearl, set, full

[frankee]

At midday the black beast slumbered in the dank cave
Its obsidian wings folded o'er the hero's grave.
His body smashed, a burnt-out husk.
The monster waits til almost dusk
to walk down to the tar-pit tarn.
It pauses by the old wood barn
Scents the wind, feels it turn
Knowledge emerges and memories burn
their way to guide it, give it reason.
The winter approches. The killing season.

Challenge words: silk serpentine meadow

Loved Your poem Uncle_Ed!

[Uncle_Ed]

A Lady, a fine one-the wife of an Earl
Wanted a necklace, expensive, of pearl.
She turned to her husband and told him "I bet
You'll buy too the earings and make a full set."
The Earl's mouth fell open as he felt in his pocket
That bulged round and full with a large diamond locket.

Words: day skylark staircase

[elyse]

The Earl's mouth fell open as he felt in his pocket
That bulged round and full with a large diamond locket.


LOL!!!

I love it!

[elyse]

she descends the staircase
once more
delicate fingers trailing
along the polished banister

she has shed
once more
her feathers of the night

she is released
once more
from His nightingale's cage

and she greets the day
once more
as His skylark

challenge words: guardian, library, dust

[Sorbus]

As Guardian,
The Library once a pleasure:
became as
an onerous duty.
Sorbus sighed,
weighted down:
as by,
the very,
Dust of Time...


Kiss Goblet Poison

[Uncle_Ed]

Kiss...goblet....poison

The scarlet dress stretched tightly across her hips
She approached on tip-toe to lightly kiss his lips.
She half-turned and paused and lowered her eyes
He felt his blood pound and his temperature rise.
He reached for his goblet of blood-red wine
And drank as he saw those eyes start to shine.
The poison quickly seized his heart and brain.
He'll never see those evil eyes again...

Words-iguana, indigestion, indecisive (blame cariad...)

[Sorbus]

`Twas upon the Night of The Iguana:
When what I believed Indigestion
clamped my belly in it`s merciless vice
The phone shattering the unholy
silence
Rang......
Once,
Twice,
Thrice.
In Indecisive rage
of being imprison`d
By the ceaseless pain
I carelessly allowed
My Precious Wife
to walk away
Never to be seen again
My friend Dr Cohen
sorrowfully me scolded
Man, Man, if only...
If only you had picked up the phone
You would not be dying here...
Alone.

Dahrjeeling Hieroglyphic Cantatas
:cool:

[Uncle_Ed]

There once was a very odd girl from Dahjeeling
Who got all her thrills hanging boys from her ceiling.
She'd leave them just dangling and remark "It's terrific
How upside-down males look like marks Hieroglyphic"
Then sometimes she'd paint them-that was merely the starters
To playing strange tunes on their naked Cantatas.

Well-it almost works!

Words. Lightning...heaven...linen

[Sorbus]

As the Lightening Flashed
Revealed Heaven
Sweet wrapped in Linen
:)

Transgress Distress Confessed:wave:
:cool:

[Uncle_Ed]

Transgress Distress Confessed

"I'm naughty" she said. "And I transgress"
He looked straight back and to her distress
Admitted he heard it when she'd confessed.

offering...henna...silver

[Sorbus]

Offering carresses
to his priapic prick
of Henna -coloured hair
The Dryad
She knelt in subservient awe
To his
Silver-eyed
Elven stare

Overpowered Sinuous Surrender

[gagged_Louise]

Going down the sinuous stair
of my dreams, and dressed in masks
I came into the wolf-pack's lair
horny and dark, where the sun never basks

The talk in there was weird, and spare;
commands growled out by any attender.
made me let out my flowing hair
and feel the overpowerng joy of surrender

And ending up tied to chairs,
my tights ripped for their pleasure,
my tits for the first that cares
my blow-job tasks were set for their leisure

Challenge words: separated, glow, sister

[Sorbus]

The incestuous Glow of your eyes
Your Separated thighs
With no guile or alibis
Welcomes me
To My Sisters Cunt


Trepidation Anguish Surrender

[Moth]

we met at the railway station, her eyes so full of anguish.her approach filled with such trepedation
she was so young and tender , an icon of stoic surrender,
no longer could i leave her to languish, in this denial , this self flagilation
i took her right there, by the roots of her hair,
as she begged for that shunting sensation.

fragile / hedonist(ic/ism) / consumed

[Sorbus]

With Unashamed Relish
The Hirsute Hedonist
devoured her
Fragile and Moistened
Sexual Flower


Contorted Satin Satiated

[Timberwolf]

Contorted form of woman
Writhes deep in the night
Sheets made of soft white satin
Wrap her in pale light

A moan, an echo so faint
Satiated need
No doubts of her desires
Under stars she feeds

Challenge words: Hold, breathe, awake

[Widget]

In your eyes I hold a vision
I breathe your breath and dream.
Am I awake?
Or is this just a fantasy of what could be.


Halloween challenge words: Zombie, Lover, Salt

[moptop]

Ooh, ooh, ooh only just seen this thread, what fun! Some fine stuff in it, too.

When I am without you
I am blank, empty
I walk strange within the world,
A zombie, dead to life
To hear your voice on the phone
Pours salt in the wound
Of longing
My love, my lover,
I am nothing without you

Challenge words
Cat, supple, distracted

[slaveangel{HM}]

I am writing about the first thing that came into my mind...
A memory from the past...



I wait for the clock to tick over
To the time that You once said
Dialling Your number
My patience at its end
For the dialling to cease

My heart floats as I hear Your voice

Suddenly I recall the reasoning for this call
I assume the punishment position
Following careful instruction
Before I even realise I find
The supple leather tawse
Slow and teasingly against my skin
As You lecture, my heart tightens
The disappointment clear in Your voice.

The first strike makes its mark
Stinging but deservingly so
Time passes slowly
Each fiery mark a token
Of my remorse

Spontaneously I
Find myself giggling
As the blows descend
"What is so amusing girl?"
Shivering as I even hear
His voice as I write this

Wiping tears of anguish away
Biting my lip so I do not laugh
"I am distracted Master"

I do not recall the exact dialogue now
But who should come in the room
And alter me from my frame of mind
But my dear cat Smokey
Who padded softly into the room
Rubbed against me as if to say "It's okay"
Then walked back outside with a thud
From her little cat flap.

Master laughed suddenly forgetting
My dire situation and hugged me mid-way
After a few brief moments he resumes
The sting all the more biting
After a moment of reprieve

*giggles* Yes true story.

~A



Three words: rose, silent, playful

[elyse]

incredulousangel offered the words: rose, silent, playful

Undone
You
seem almost playful
in the beginning
attentive
charming
smiling
offering
the lightest of touches
an intoxicating sip
from your finest goblet
a perfect rose
from your cloistered garden

A rose that,
once accepted,
draws first blood
then first gasp
then another
as you,
now silent as stone,
lower your head
to my wounded palm
lift your gaze
to my widening eyes
and slowly,
deliberately
drink
your
fill...

new challenge words: turret, warrior, trickle

[frankee]

incredulousangel offered the words: rose, silent, playful

Undone
You
seem almost playful
in the beginning
attentive
charming
smiling
offering
the lightest of touches
an intoxicating sip
from your finest goblet
a perfect rose
from your cloistered garden

A rose that,
once accepted,
draws first blood
then first gasp
then another
as you,
now silent as stone,
lower your head
to my wounded palm
lift your gaze
to my widening eyes
and slowly,
deliberately
drink
your
fill...

new challenge words: turret, warrior, trickle


elyse,

i absolutely loved this poem!!!!!

[DrkRvn]

Such beautiful poems all of them

[TheDeSade]

You know, I am really beginning to think I am out of my league here. I read and respond to the most incredible talent then I go look at my feeble efforts and think I should just sit down, shut up and be humble.

[elyse]

You know, I am really beginning to think I am out of my league here. I read and respond to the most incredible talent then I go look at my feeble efforts and think I should just sit down, shut up and be humble.

no! sit down and WRITE!

*temptingly* there are always three lovely words waiting here, begging to be taken and used...

[TheDeSade]

thinks about it .. . . . and aboutother things which beg to be taken and used. . . STOP IT . . . get your mind back on the business at hand . . . concentrate . . . write . . write . . write. . .

[moptop]

C'mon TDS - or else some other person from this ridiculously rich pool of talent that abounds here might beat you to it! and I don't think they should...

[lily27]

elyse provided warrior, turret, and trickle. "turret" was hard. I did what I could.


Complete

a warrior,
forever wounded,
plagued
by the horror,
scars
that never heal,
seeks comfort in the arms of another

a young girl
seeks completion,
confused
by her needs,
tears
trickle down
exposing her most secret emotions

in her
He finds strength,
in Him
she finds peace

together
they lie
in the turrets
of their minds,
forever together
but an ocean apart

[lily27]

I forgot to put in the new challenge words:

sphere, rain, anticipate

[elyse]

lily, dearest.... you have been holding out on us, you naughty girl!!
(by the way, variant forms of the challenge words, like 'turrets' for 'turret', are absolutely allowed.)

[Timberwolf]

"lily, dearest.... you have been holding out on us, you naughty girl!!"

I agree, she's a woman of many talents. No wonder you two get along so well. ;)

[elyse]

lily26 offered the words: sphere, rain, anticipate

rest
in the embrace of friends
in this ethereal place
in this self-made sphere
of caring and compassion

watch
as rain beyond the windows
washes the world clean
drenching everything with possibility
slowly soaking away sorrow

rest
watch
and anticipate
with unexpected hope
the promise
of a new day...

new challenge words: bright, dark, whole

[Uncle_Ed]

new challenge words: bright, dark, whole

The bright star faltered in the heavens,
Leaving great swathes of the night sky black.
The planet-folk looked and trembled,
Wolves ceased hunting and gathered in their pack.
The days grew dark also, the months began to fade.
Time itself was fractured, Time came to be afraid.
The Sun-Goddess smiled from her slumber
and breathed life unto the whole.
To protect and to succour once and ever was her goal.

New words: Steel; skull; Sly

[poetic_justice]

Uncle_Ed offered: Steel; Skull; Sly

---

And while the deafening madness
Of pain no longer bared
Continues to eat at that
Steel tortured soul
Of utter human delights.

And the nightmares and horrors
Of mans blackened skulls
Creeps deeper to the tormenting
Humiliation, that so often
Threatens to take one over.

When faced with the erotic yet disturbing
Confrontation of murderous
Desires and hopes
That outline the sly dominance
Of one no longer favoured.

---

New challenged words: Pen, Monotonous, Imitation

[slaveangel{HM}]

I sit silently at my desk
The paper virgin before me
A blank canvass
Waiting longingly to be filled

I take the pen in my fingers
Toy with it slowly
Deep in thought
Pondering where to start

I begin to write
Free flowing as if were a dance
Tingling as my fingers smooth
Over the rapid text

Suddenly the tone changes
Inner thoughts are released
The rhythm now monotonous
My mind suddenly skewed

I flick back to other poems
Muses of the soul
Trying to hard to find something
But fearful of imitation

~A


New Words: clamp, chocolate, wanton

[Uncle_Ed]

]


New Words: clamp, chocolate, wanton

She was creamy and smooth and she looked like a vamp.
With lips like a hoover and thighs like a clamp.
She poured herself on me like hot chocolate sauce
I added the cream as events ran their course.
She was wanton-now molten she lies in a puddle.
This Candy was hot-and that was the trouble.



Offered words: Fireside; cane; alligator

[moptop]

My alligator just ate my cane
I told it not to, then it did it again!
I have a collection, and don't want to lose it,
But poor ally's scared I'm going to abuse it.
We had a discussion, his teeth won the day -
I decided to listen and stop all my play.
So now we are sitting by the warm fireside,
companionably chatting to try to decide
what sort of wood burns brightest and best,
and which of my canes I should feed on next.



New words: brewing, lighthouse, reel

[Uncle_Ed]

Forget answer, moptop-I just want to say WOW! Great comic poem!!!

[moptop]

Awww, shucks, Ed, thank you very much!

[TheDeSade]

Reeling in the blustry gale
amid the brewing storm
he trudged, head down
toward the sound
of the forelorn foghorns round

To the lighthouse on the shore
he made his careful way
to set the light
that pierced the night
a sailors saving sight


new words: course, strict, closure

[slaveangel{HM}]

*pokes TDS* You need to post three new words! ;) Wonderful poem by the way.

[TheDeSade]

ok ok . . I editted it . . . . . . geezzzzz. . . get a little senile and all you get is poked

[slaveangel{HM}]

ok ok . . I editted it . . . . . . geezzzzz. . . get a little senile and all you get is poked

*giggles* it was a gentle poke TDS *winks*

[TheDeSade]

umhum.. . .rubbing my side

[moptop]

The affaire ran its course
in the strictest sense
there was no closure

The affaire ran like a river
restricted in its course
struggling but enclosed

The affaire broke
like a dam bursting,
in a great roar, ripping loose
from the confines and restrictions
the strictures and structures
the strict closed choking constraints
the enclosing, encloaking control.
Shrieking, it ran

The affaire ended, of course.
finally stricken:
drowned to a close


Defeatist; bottle; flicker

[moptop]

*pokes TDS in the other side*

That's yoga, TDS: you must always remain balanced, maintaining your body in equilibrium.

[TheDeSade]

geeezzzzzzzzzz.. .rubbing both sides. . . . . . this yoga stuff sucks

[TheDeSade]

ok . . this one really sucks. . . but. . .

Staring at the bottle
Empty like his heart
No drop of loves sweet liquor
Remains since they did part

Fine red wine flowed forth
As if to fill the space
She made with her departing
Relief would leave no trace

He looked into his memory
Her face would flicker there
The sparkle of her lovely eyes
The smell of her soft hair

But ego was his defeatist
He caused his own despair
For lack of words to tell her
How much he really cared


Three New Words: decry, indolent, perchance

[elyse]

Thanks a lot, TDS.

I saw 'perchance' and immediately thought 'to sleep, perchance to dream'. Which woke up my Muse, who whispered "an excellent notion, pet. give me a Shakespearean sonnet -- you may have fifteen minutes."

*sigh*

beyond the edge, with reckless joy i dance
as passion's flames lick lightly at my heels;
i drop from my mad pirouettes -- perchance
lust's bonfire now will murmur "Lo! she kneels!"

No more the lazing odalisque am i,
content to flaunt an indolent allure;
one backward glance, and i must needs decry
the woman-girl who seemed so smug and sure.

against the blaze which does my body limn
i sway and spin and, stumbling, rise once more,
my every movement offered as a hymn
to cruel, beloved Master from His whore.

Denied the very floodtide i desire
i bow, and leap once more into His fire.
~elyse


challenge words: requiem, insistent, arch

[TheDeSade]

15 minutes!!!!.. . geezx. . . . I struggle for days to get a sonnet right. YOU never cease to amaze me. sighs. . .now I really do feel inadequate

[elyse]

i didn't quite make the deadline -- it took me 22 minutes and change.
*wonders what penalty the Muse will demand...*

[KnightandDay]

Just like the "Iron Chef" cooking show, but with words instead of food! :)

Rules:

1. use the three (3) challenge words below in a poem. Variations are allowed (example: if the word is 'walk', then walks, walked or walking would be acceptable)

2. the first person to post a completed poem then posts three new challenge words and, if desired, a poetic form (free verse, sonnet, sestina, etc)

have fun!

Challenge Words: collar, nibble, twilight

~ elyse
He looked up
Not seeing from whence she came
He felt moved by her
Seeing the her collar, the material trancending its shimmering design
Was it instead two cool streams wrapping themselves around her neck?
It would be a crime to spoil the soft pale flesh that emerged there
Just a nibble?
As he did he was washed away, caught up in the current that was her spirit
Where did she come from he idly wondered
Always his favorite time of day, Twilight had been where he found her
Would this be the end or the begining?
He waited for the answer ...

[moptop]

KnightandDay, it`s good that you`ve joined in, and thank you for your poem. However, you should really pick up fromm Elyse`s sonnet, and you need to offer 3 new words.

Elyse also seems to have her own personal iron poet challenge going on, too, producging some great stuff - please see the Reading and Writing, Erotic and Nonerotic poetry sections, and please feel free to post there, too.

[TheDeSade]

Dont forget the January Poetry Contest also!. . . get your entry in today!

[moptop]

Elyse`s challenge words were : requiem, insistent, arch

[moptop]

Hey, TDS - I havn`t even thought about any new writing for the last month or so! I will see what I can do, but I have a feeling I might miss this one... I`m SO glad you`re back and getting better!

[TheDeSade]

Wait. . . I was counting on you entering a poem . .you better get busy

[moptop]

OK, OK - I`ve been thinking about it - the words have started to have their own insistent life - something is bound to happen (of whatever dubious quality...)

[gagged_Louise]

Picking up on Elyse’s challenge words: requiem insistent arch

Walking under the rounded arch out
Into gardens of my desire
The silky wishes just march out
And swarm about my feet.
Can you hear my bar shout
For a whisky, rising higher?
I sure can, from last night out
Me old hubby never could search out
The dark spots of what I require


Hard and insistent hands that took
The easy days away
An unyielding requiem; the outlook
Was vanilla all the way
Then lightning broke, and did singe
My low suburban speed
Blew open the shutters, inch by inch
Rescued by rope, by hook and pinch
The humming painslut was freed

New challenge words: olive, bound, return

[TheDeSade]

Olive skinned
and darkly beautiful
she stands ready now
to hear his words which
promise to make her
forever more his
with love

Willingly now
Bound to him
with words so engaging
that to return to life
before her submission
is impossible

She is
his without question
possessed mind and body
owned totally with no reservation
she stands ready now
in dark beauty
olive skinned


new challenge words

intense, patient, pout

[poetic_justice]

His deep green eyes stared, consumed, enveloped
With the intense heat of her scorching heart
As His hand trailed her soft pale skin
Caressing what was rightfully His.

Her full crimson lips, whimpering with hungered need
While He smiled, torturer, tormenter, whispering...
"Patience, my pet"
And the insanity struck again.

Laughing at the warm begging of her want
At the innocent light from her eyes
Lost in that beautiful softness
Of her lingering, longing pout.

New words: flaccid, beating, blue

[slaveangel{HM}]

Blue is the representation of sadness
Tears stained on a pale cheek
Forlorn heart beating monotonously
Hoping the rhythm would quicken

Life blood bursting through withered veins
Soul finding the light
No longer flaccid and weak

The dream of the lonely


New Words: soul, blade, confident

[violet girl{MM}]

*clears throat*
a haiku, by moi...;)

...as the blade glides down
she feels her soul dissipate
confident in Him...

*bows*

New words: solace, grief, journey

*runs off*

[DoctorE]

The staircase leads to the sultry day
where the skylark sings and flies away


challenge words desire,need,ache

[DoctorE]

Awash in grief ,agony and pain
I find solace in what I have gained
My journey stops not, but forever more
I shall keep searching until I am sure





challenge words whip,sear,soul

[slaveangel{HM}]

challenge words desire,need,ache


Quietly the girl kneeled
Trembling, fearful at His silence
Dull ache, her wrists bound
Behind her

A strict voice resonates
"Look at Me girl,"
Quiver of disappointment, undertoned
girl's soul tortured

Desire to redeem
The need to feel safe
To be sheltered oncemore in His good grace
The punishment begins



New Words: Redemption, bound, tawse

[slaveangel{HM}]

challenge words whip,sear,soul

*writes another one as Doc changed His words lol

My three new words are the words I posted in my above poem which are
New Words: Redemption, bound, tawse

The crack of the whip
Sharply strikes her flesh
Marks of love and lust
Punishment resumes
Searing pain through her body
Touching her soul, asking for love
Her screams are her redemption
Tears taken by her Master
Poured into His soul
Balm of healing
Souls merged together
girl is forgiven

[DoctorE]

I seek redemption in what I take
The skin so red the tawse will make
I believe so much in what I found
That the heart and soul are forever bound



challenge words ( realm,majestic,honor )

[violet girl{MM}]

Lying in Your realm
Sensing Your majestic soul,
Grace bound by honor...

challenge words temptation, tethered, weary

[thrall]

I float on an ocean of temptation
teathered to bottom by heavy chains
my soul becomming weary for freedom

challange word

lust sorrow soul

[MrEmann]

What are the latest challenge words then?

[thrall]

langushing in a life unbidden
lusting for the desiers unattained
sorrow fills the soul...

challenge words

unknown... desire....redemption

[gagged_Louise]

He was unknown to me, and his fire
seemed a pale reflection of my own
heartfelt wish to be chained and flown
to the outer edges of my desire


But when he held his whip in hand
and commnended me down
his rough voice forced the redemption
of my misjudging him. He did own
the means to stop my intervention.

challenge words. flogger, silent, redirected

[thrall]

sharp sting, heavy thud
rhythmicly landing
to the metronome of silent screams

Redirected thoughts turning inward
finding peace...
and floating free

challange words

pain...undying....worship

[anonymouse]

I've tried in vain to end the pain
of inner rhymes within this verse.
The pain of searching for the perfect word,
to conjugate a verb that's left unheard.

Undyingly's the adverb we
have rhymed in ways that aren't the first.
There's words to worship that we find
drive us crazy 'cause they can't be rhymed...

Challenge words:

orange, purple, silver

[thrall]

Fuck me here and Fuck me there
Just Fuck me anywhere

Kiss me now, Kiss me twice
but if your dicks not wraped it won't by nice

Have your choice, hold my life
pick a condom
the orange, purple or silver
all will be nice...

challange words

jewel....girl.....percious


I know its cheesy but i couldnt help myself.......lol

[WyldWyl]

My most precious jewel,
My girl, my chosen, far beyond perfection
My love, all that I do, I do for you
And all I have to give is yours.

Yay, sappy but fun -smiles-

ok... my words, and just to be a bastard about it...

pheasant... betrayal... nuclear

[WyldWyl]

Oh, fine. I'll do it myself. COWARDS, I SAY!!

I am betrayed by you all
By your lack of courage, your pheasant-like cowardice
My disgust is like a nuclear furnace
Blazing, hot, inspiring, poetically overstated!

New words, easier this time

Rain, leaves, candle. But I'm not bailing you out this time!

[gagged_Louise]

Spread your legs, he said
focussing his eyes on me
in the empire bed.
That leaves me powerless, mute,
the rest left unsaid,
as his gaze wanders,
ponders, settles to drive me mad this time
with vigourous pain. He turns his back
and ties my thighs apart.
In the dusky light, soon all I will see
is the dripping candle,
and Him...


New challenge words: morning, controlled, sing

[Guest91408]

The morning light spilled upon her
The golden rays lit her
Angelic features in restful sleep
I watched her softly rising breasts
Her long, lithe legs
Her lips held a smile

I controlled the urge,
Oh god, the desperate urge
To pull her from the bed
And tie her high
Her wrists bound
Her legs spread

The crop in my hand,
Waiting, wanting and needing
To make her sing her pleasure
For me and her submission

Im not a poet. lol.

new words: fire, addiction, moon

[thrall]

burning hearst ablaze in fire
consumed with the addiction of love

hands that hold hearts of flame
give hommage beneath the moon




new words...........

lost sorrow unknown

[gagged_Louise]

Wild forlorn hair
slowly swept in the wind
she comes out of her sandy lair
of sorrow, of woes unknown

No longer will she stay lost in the past
she kneels to the rising moon
voice picking up, she calls
feeling her heart filled
and ready to go...anywhere soon...

new challenge words: bound, superb, embers

[MrEmann]

The heart bound to another
the memory fresh and superb
the dying embers of love lost.

[thrall]

hello I'm still using GL's same words..........for lack of new three words...LOL

Embers burn
Of heat and time
Stoked by a masters hand

Bound with love
Secured in pain

Supurb the pleasures glory



new words

fire
ice
flame

[jeanne]

Like a flame, desire burns
her soul.
The fire of want, need, desperate longing
Melting the ice around her heart.

New words:
sleep, dream, nightmare

[thrall]

I drem of sleep
Of waking dreams
Nightmares yet unfolding

Lost in time
Lost in space
In a universe still expanding


new words

rage
sorrow
lust

[jeanne]

There is rage in my heart
and lust in his
Underneath it all, sorrow
The divide between us is unbridgeable.

New words:
sweet, candy, innocence

[thrall]

Candy melts
Caramel cracks
Oh sweet the pain and pleasure

Innocence lost
A new life found
In the paradise of the senses


new words

life
death
eternal

[jeanne]

If I were immortal
Granted the gift of eternal life
Would it become a curse?
Would I yearn for death?

New words:
yes, no, maybe

[thrall]

For all the joy
The word is yes

For all the sorrow
No

For all the pain
In life to come

The only word is
maybe


new words

feel
hope
day

[jeanne]

A new day
An opportunity, challenge, chance
To feel
Hope
Love
Desire
Sorrow
Anger
Joy

New words:
off, on, turn

[thrall]

The turn of time
The light of day
Forever on the horizon.......

Beacon's on, to show the way
Turned off ,to blind peril.....

new words

still
give
stay

[WyldWyl]

In the still, the quiet hours
With nothing left to give
No gift remaining, word unsaid
I wonder how to make you stay

<edit> ooops, my words! uhh... memory, breasts, glass. The first three things that came to mind. </edit>

[MrEmann]

My apologies. I did not know once I wrote a poem, I had to frunish three challenge words. Next time , if there is a, I will A) read the rules, and B) throw out three challenge words.

[thrall]

Of days gone by
Of memory’s past
Suckled from my breast

Shattered lives
Of broken dreams
Only shards of fragile glass




New words

Calling
Darkness
Flowing

[MrEmann]

He hears the calling of love fading fast
He knows the darkness is coming at last
All feeling flowing away from him leaving him dying inside


lost
memories
divine

[moptop]

as she slipped into that divine space
she lost her way
lost her sense
lost her memories;
she dove into the abyss and oblivion
of pain and desire
and desire for pain


New words

nails
ashtray
window-sill

Yeah - we don't have to take it seriously all the time!!

[thrall]

Awash in memories
Darkness found
Bleeds the thoughts
And pain abounds

Lost in sorrow
Lost in grief
The heart is open
For all who seek

Some souls pass
Some collide
Forever eternal
Forever entwined

Divine solace
Will come again
As the universe spins
So galaxies combine

new words..
Hope
Joy
love


sorry didnt pay attention................and posted as i finished

new words

nails
ashtray
window-sill.............LOL

[MrEmann]

the final nails driven into his coffin, his heart
memories smoldering in the ashtray of his life
left on the window sill that used to light his soul

New Words
butter
callous
defamed

[thrall]

calloused hands
do butter pans
my name holds undefamed

hew words

hold
hearts
forever

[MrEmann]

Forever. He stood watching as it was dreamed
as dark hearts strove and schemed
If only He could grab hold and never let go again

soul
spirit
sense

[gagged_Louise]

Hearts on fire, skin on fire
will hold vigil through the pyre
hot and crackling, needy and wanted
wanting to inspire
I knew he'd be taking my service for granted

new words: dawn, bound, searching

[thrall]

Through the dawn
Where sunlight breaks
Lovers will be bound

Searching the darkness
For hands to hold
To show and guide the way


new words

play
fun
games

[MrEmann]

something is wrong here.

[thrall]

and whats that??

[Warbaby1943]

and whats that??
I can't seem to catch you.

[moptop]

I does look as though everyone was suddenly posting at the same time and missing eachother's words, doesn't it!

The words I see last are

play
fun
games

Boys and girls come out to play
Skip and laugh, have fun
Enjoy your games, smile while you may
Spread laughter in the sun

One day you may find a darker side
A game played in the night
Under the moonlight with shining skin
A grimmer, harder sweet delight
Fun still to be had, oh yes -
But fun bound and held in seriousness
Fun to be learnt, right to be earnt
A game to play not lightly



New words

emerald
oak
couch

[thrall]

To feel the words
Of love and play
Couched in a gentle whisper

An oak will stand
The test of time
For all those who remember

Feel my sorrow
Feel my pain
As you swim in emerald eyes


new words
gift
once
gold

[MrEmann]

Once long ago I did hold
A thing more precious than all the gold
Now My heart has this rift
I fear I have lost this gift.

eternity
suffering
soul

[thrall]

Time in seconds
Time in days
Time in geologic ways

Forever here
Forever there
Time in universal ways

Souls were born
At dawn of time
Through suffering and through pain

Souls that breach
The test of time
Eternity within reach

Souls that share
A life of knowing
bliss thay have reached


new words

days
life
love

[MrEmann]

When ever I recall the days gone by
I always hang my head and cry
Once I had the perfect love
now she is all I think of
she will begin her new life
as someone else's wife


alone
untouched
feelings

[thrall]

Alone in the darkness
Forever it seems

With feeling so much
Only wanting to please

Never untouched
The soul will wonder

Into the darkest hell
Where we all seem to wonder



New words

Thoughts
Dreams
Darkness

[gagged_Louise]

Eyes I saw in dreams
they drift across the day-lit sky
quietly scanning the horizon
and following, as it seems
the steps and sins of the passers-by

Looking through the paper, my thoughts
running dry
Across the darkness of the field,
the searchlight eyes
pan and cross
through the air, all around the sky

new words: blinker, future, need

[thrall]

I see the blinker
Flashes in my mind
Danger that waits
Forever in time


Feel the past
Feel the future
Mistakes one made
Germinate at last


Where there is need
Fear not to go
Existence is simple
For all who know




New words

Words
Burn
why

[thrall]

inferno

I hear the words
That burn through my soul
Set my life on fire

See the blaze
Hear the roar
The inferno waits for you

Why must it ever end
Burn me
Scorch my world to cinders


New words

Mesh
Carve
Dust

[moptop]

The dust caught in my throat:
I choked and squeezed closed my eyes.
But still I could see your face
A mesh of hair blown across your smile,
Darkness and brilliance.
When the dust had settled,
I opened my eyes
and once again attacked the stone
from which I was carving your image.
The stone would never leave me.



Radio
Towel
Bat

[Uncle_Ed]

The long summer evening faded to gold.
The radio played softly some tunes that were old.
She stirred in her towel that had long since grown dry
Her swimsuit revealing to his questing eye.
"By 'eck lass" He said, "your arse has grown fat"
As he rubbed in more linseed to his best cricket bat.

Truffles
Microscope
Tsunami

[violet girl{MM}]

the truffles You sent me were delicious, so luscious and rich
i ate them with lunch, alongside my sandwich.
back to the biology lab, my face full of hope
to study and discover with my microscope.
a tsunami of answers pours out from my brain
as my heart aches for You with a dull, throbbing pain.

celebrate
tube
spray

[gagged_Louise]

Celebration day:
He's back in town
smacking my dainty butt
and ruffling my panty, but
will he follow down
my glistneing, hot allure?
my spray of fatalicious
scent and posture?

But I have a trick up my sleeve
as he looks over my body and face
the rich white skin, my breasts' slow heave
and inspecting his devoted masochist
I present him with a tube of lube´
for him to use, now he cannot resist...

New words: waiting, sunrise, lace

[thrall]

I wait in shadows
Listing for your voice
Words to stir my soul

The sunrise breaks
The dawn of day
I bask in His light

The pleasure of his voice
The bridge to his soul
Let me feel your world

Delicate as lace, strong as steel
I wait to hear you voice
I wait, My Master, I wait.


New words

Forgive
Hope
Joy

[jeanne]

I forgive you for any pain you may cause.
My hope overcomes pain.
My joy blooms from suffering.


New words: live, love, laugh

[thrall]

I live my life
I love to laugh
I live to laugh and love it


new words

feel
pleasure
pain

[jeanne]

Pleasure is a pond
Calm and placid
Enveloping my body
Slowly, slowly...

Pain crashes in
A wave, striking the shore
Scattering my thoughts like driftwood
Now I can only feel



New words: smile, frown, growl

[thrall]

I hear the growl
I know I'm wrong
Forever misunderstanding

I feel the frown
still unseen
knowing the punishment to come

I know the smile
Pain and pleasure
Ours to enjoy


new words

grace
beauty
home


Hi J

[jeanne]

Hi thrall


Conducting myself with grace,
my beauty and confidence a reflection of Him...
His love and care.
He is my home
I am always home.


New words: fight, surrender, triumphant

[thrall]

I fight His will
Surrendering my soul
Triumphant His conquest


new words........rage, force, push

[jeanne]

Oh, I'm inspired to two entries!!

1)

Everyday, fate laughed.

I lived my life thus:
Rage against circumstance
Force my will on others
Push for what I want

Thank God, no more.

2) this one is autobiographical

His rage knows no bounds
How dare I consider giving to another what belongs to him?
He pushes my face into the shower wall
Using force, takes what is his.
I cum, in gratitude.


New words: stop, go, slow

[thrall]

Please never let stop
Please don't let me go
please slow the tides of time

please...........



new words

edge, fall, forever

[jeanne]

Balancing on the edge
Which way to go?
Back to safety, sureness, boredom?
Or forward
To the fall, trusting Him to catch you.
Trusting Him, forever.
Which would you choose?

New words: fun, connection, caring

[thrall]

The pain is mine
In caring so much
fun and games not longer

Connections are made
Connections are broken
The pain is mine alone


new words

grip, hold, keep

[jeanne]

I grip the rope tied around my wrists
"Don't move" He whispers.
I try to hold still, yet my body quivers
"You're not being a good girl" He growls.
Why do I keep failing?


New words: release, fly, float

[thrall]

Release my soul
To fly with wings
Fledge me into the wind

Float the currents
Heat driving the air
Against my new born wings

new words
ice, fire, water

[jeanne]

This is my last one - I really have to go to bed! It's been super fun playing with you, thrall!

His disapproval has many forms
Ice - freezing me out
Fire - burning me with his anger
Water - his disappointment, flowing over me, being absorbed into my skin, infused into my very soul.

New words: head, heart, hands

Have a wonderful evening!

[thrall]

Hold my burning heart
Within your loving hands
Hang not your head in sorrow


new words
day, night, time



that was eight in a row J..............great fun, thanks good night!

[jeanne]

For me, day is day, night is night.
For you, night is day, day is night.
This won't work
There is no time together.

New words: help, ignore, save

[thrall]

Help me please
Ignore my past
Save me from the future

Help me please
Remember today
Forge my life in time



new words

play
keep
friends

Hi his J

[jeanne]

Hi thrall

Play with friends
Memories of childhood
Keep my heart young

New words: airplane, boat, car

[thrall]

A travelers journey
Through the world
every method explored

With airplane wings
Wake of a boat
roar of a car

A travelers journey
where all one needs
is the imagination of the mind



new words
trust.
honor
wisdom

[jeanne]

Trust - earned.
Honor - bestowed.
Wisdom - gained.

Geez, could I have made that any shorter?!

New words: daily, weekly, monthly

[thrall]

Daily,weekly, monthly
I learn to understand you

Daily,weekly monthly
I learn to feel you

Daily, weekly, monthly
I learn to trust you

Daily, weekly, monthly
i learn to love you more.....


new words............and cant think of more.......lol

fresh, flowers, dew

[jeanne]

Morning.
A cup of fresh coffee
Flowers blooming in the yard
Dew on the grass
Take a deep breath - life is wonderful.

New words: when, sex, often

[thrall]

the smell of sex
is heave in the air
when will you return
my mind often wonders


new words

flame
hide
river

[jeanne]

A flame-like pain
I fight
Then I ride
Like a swift-flowing river
I can no longer hide from you.

New words:
desk, chair, computer

[thrall]

a barren desk
the computers life
the chair beckons softly


new words

still
here
always

[slaveangel{HM}]

new words

still
here
always




Still I linger in waiting
You forever in my heart
Here I remain silently in my pain
Your absence tormenting my soul
Across space and time
Distance a stark reminder
Of O/our terrible position
My badge of submission my pride
Always Yours my Master
In mind and spirit
Do not forget me...


New words: barren, decision, love.

[thrall]

We balance on the edge of our would
Barren of all feelings and desires
The decision not yet made
endless joy
found in the arms of love


new words

share, please, hope

[jeanne]

ooohhh good words...

We share
My desire to please you
Your hope for my improvement

New words: secret, life, joy

[thrall]

I open my heart
I open my mind
I share the secret
for you to find

My life is now yours
You see the pain
The darkness is shared
Be not afraid

My secrets are yours
No longer afraid
I feel the joy
your now in the maze


new words

play, stay, happy

[jeanne]

Very nice!

The play begins
My nerves run riot
I settle down...
A little

Deeper we go
Harder, a little harsher
I begin to feel...
Happy

It's time to go
I want to stay
I walk away...
Wishing for more


New words: blue, purple, red

[thrall]

Vivid splashes
The colors of my life

Blue glaciers
Run through my heart

Purple bruises
Appear on my skin

I see red
The anger within

Color my world
In dreams we live


new words
spice, heat, throb

[jeanne]

She lies
Prone in the heat
Pulse throbbing
Skin tingling
Dreaming of you and
The spice you bring to her vanilla life


New words: sleep, wake, think

[thrall]

Hold me Master
Protect me form dreams

I sleep for your pleasure
Wake not the dreams

I think of you often
You are my dream.......



new words

still, hold, quiet

[thrall]

Still my mind
Hold my dreams
Quiet the wicked words



new words

push, anger, turn

[gagged_Louise]

Push me down, push me over
I can sense your ruthless
bruising hands, your
pounding anger
Pitifully wringing my bound hands
flushed face watching
as the whip comes
hailing down on me
turning me red
Soon you will be plunging into me
I am alone, I face the danger
licking my flesh
alone with the one I've given
my body, my soul, my holes
to be filled and used by You

new challenge words: call, blindfold, faith

[thrall]

I hear the call
with words unspoken

the blindfold is falling
the bonds undone

faith is faltering
the pain overwhelming


new words

tide, ramble, sand

[slaveangel{HM}]

My mind consumed with sorrow
Pray for peace and stability...
My heart blowing away like tiny grains of sand
Soon nothing will be left...
My soul ebbing and flowing, an oceans tide
Do not cast a stone into its already turbulant waters...
Allow her to find clarity, do not let her ramble


New Words: constrict, love, drip

[gumby]

Hands constricting throat
Sweet vitae drips from my lips
Pain exchanged for love


New Words:suffer, passion, loss

[ElectricBadger]

Back!
With your fiendish books of gods
With suffering self-righteous pain
Back!
With Hell-fire and vicious rods
With repressed passion gone insane
Back!
I'll not lose my soul, too.


Tempest; Glass; Jeans.

[thrall]

The tempest of my soul
the storm within
breaks the glass barrier of my mind
forever in wet jeans




new words

fall, inside, ground

[ElectricBadger]

A thousand lonely figures
Empty within, waiting to fill the void
Tomorrow
A thousand things to do right now.
Dreams can wait awhile.

A thousand lonely figures
Falling down, filling the void
Inside
The ground; a thousand hungry graves
And all our dreams still waiting.


New words: Red, Bohemian, Love.

[Austerus]

red stripes on pale flesh
sweet bohemian summer
what else could love be?

[ElectricBadger]

Very nice, but you forgot to post more words! 'ere we go, though:

Cellar; Garret; Gallery.

[Phantom]

The cage is in the cellar
she looks through the bars
knowing the rope in the garret
awaits those who scream
and then, the gallery
is for those who dream

Chaos, predator, armor

[thrall]

See the depth of Fire
And Fly my friend
Fear not the heat
We carry our own light

Remove the hood
Release the jesses
Launched into the air
Predator finding easy prey

Find the chinks
Within the armor
Arrows through the air
Flying in the light

Wicked silence
Rampant dreams
Sow the seeds, of
Chaos in the light

Friends that stand
Within the void, find
Strength to fell the beast
Predator becoming the prey


new words


alone sad unknown

[Uncle_Ed]

Alone she sat,the screen gone white.
She'd been there looking most the night.
She tried being good-she'd tried being bad
But no-one read her words so sad.
And so she sits there all alone.
And no-one cares-she's quite unknown.

Words.

Sniff
Adjective
Colonial

[moptop]

Yes, alright, alright, Nunc, you got me. Not good, but whatever, tis done, not undone now.

She swung gently to and fro
Genteel upon her porch;
Shaded from the colonial scorch
She sniffed a sniff of genteel woe.

Musingly, she tried to find
An adjective of ample strength;
One that would describe the length
And depth of feelings in her mind.

‘Abominable’ seemed so trite:
She aimed to be original.
Intending to be terminal,
She wanted it to be just right.

‘Disgusting’ dropped, ‘Disgraceful’ too,
She smiled a little smile;
Her bright eyes shone with renewed guile:
She had it now, she knew!

He was so mean, so cruel, so bad,
She’d found the perfect way.
She knew now just what to say:
He was a captivating cad!


New words

Glass
Wine
Gorilla

[Uncle_Ed]

The wine, he thought, in a glass be chilled.
The sandwich toasted.His taste-buds thrilled.
He put the wine then in the chiller
The sandwich went into the gorila-who was passing by.

New words.
Hike
prunes
conflagration

[moptop]

He said brightly, 'Let's go for a hike!'
I replied tightly, 'Get on yer bike!
I've eaten too many prunes
To dare venture out onto the dunes.
My rear end is in conflagration
And whilst I'm suffering this sensation,
I'm not going anywhere, mate.'

New words
Fluffy
Pink
Herring

[gagged_Louise]

Fluffy is the feel of her hair
pink is the tint of her lips
But she's a demon seed
a femme fatale
and her talk is like a can of fermented herring
pervading the air

yep, it's surströmming season in the North at present
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fermented_herring

new challlenge words:
bound
proud
adorned

[thrall]

bound by sadness
face adorned with tears
proud no longer



new words
rest
forever
peace

[moptop]

I can find no rest
Neither flesh nor fowl
I wander, ever longing

I can feel no peace
My lust for blood grows
I yearn to feel the life force

I feel my teeth itch
I desire flesh
Forever I stalk, seeking


New words

Pot
Kettle
Black

[Uncle_Ed]

Pot Kettle Black

Once a jolly subbie camped by a Dominant
Under the shade of a bamboo cane tree
And she sang as she watched and waited til her Kettle boiled
You'll cum a-whackin' my tender rear for me!

Whackin' my tender! Whackin' my tender!
You'll cum a-whackin' my tender rear for me!

And she sang as she watched and waited til her kettle boiled
You'll cum a-whackin' my tender rear for me!


Down came a another sub to try out for that Dominant
Black were her intentions and rosey her bot!
Up jumped the first sub and beat her with some poetry
Mounted her and stuffed her and shoved her in the pot!

You'll cum...etc (Refrain or restrain-whatever turns you on)

New words:

Python
Cabernet-Sauvignon
Willy.

[thrall]

Like a python of hell
snaking pain through you veins

I bleed deep red
The color of Cabernet-Sauvignon

Willy the sorrow
The depth of my soul


new words

reach
grasp
hold

[moptop]

His hand leapt out to grab me.
I twisted and avoided his hold;
He grinned.
"I have a long reach," he said.
"I can make you gasp in my grasp.
I can make you cry in my clasp.
I can make you retch as I rasp
your skin."
"Huh. Just try it!" I said.
So he did.


New words
futility
transference
underhand

[thrall]

The futility of my existence
Striving for perfection
Excepting the transference of wills
Never enough

Underhand methods,
A sinister smile
I feel your will
And it is enough


new words

cascade
pain
rivers

[Rhabbi]

A cascade of emotion
A torrent of desire
Bringing life to desolation
And a raging fire

Does life have to be pain
Can it not be always joy
A summer storm of rain
And some time with a toy

Knowing you brings rivers
And the maelstrom of whitewater
My life is full of shivers
And pleasure ever after

New words

honey
rising
seasons

[thrall]

A season of joy
Rising in the sun
Honey kisses air


new words

hold
hands
save

[jeanne]

Your hands, in my hair
Hold me still, hold me captive
And I hope for no one to save me
I'm where I need to be

New words:
stop, cry, laugh

[moptop]

I like a laugh. I like to grin.
But sometimes it must stop.
I can take it on the chin -
Sometimes humour is a flop.
I must do well. I have to try -
Even though I often fail.
And sometimes, yes, I need to cry:
Sometimes I can feel so frail.


New words

Amorous
Genetic
Piano

[thrall]

Genetic betrayal, cosmic joke
Doomed to live and die
Pray for an end with a deft stroke

A life of keys, so like a piano
Music made by a masters hand
Souls beating to a deafening crescendo

Amorous heart, death comes to us all
Betrayed as we are by time
Burn brightly before the inevitable fall



new words

lamp
call
book

[John56{vg}]

My lamp shines into the
night.

The horn calls to me
from the fog

Another ship led safely to
harbor

Another mark in my
book.

Heat
pool
land

[seriouslynosn]

A New Move: A Haiku
This new land of mine.
The heat of stress killing me.
Cool in 'freshing pool.

New words: blossom, invite, grow

[thrall]

Grow for me,beautiful one
Blossom in my care
I invite you into my arms



new words


sleep
coffee
lust

[gagged_Louise]

Don't need no sleep to get here on time
and no damn tea to ignite me
I need some cookies in this autumn clime
and the promise of your flogger to smite me

But give me that coffee, shining like nightly skies
and stinging on my tongue
triggering your thoughts and mine as you devise
a bondage yet unsung.

Oh Dom, old captain! pull the chain up and go!
Me tired of vanilla, oh Sir! What You will,
Give me the wine of unfamiliar pain, heigh-ho!
To the abyss of the unknown to discover a new thrill.

(last stanza inspired by the final lines of Baudelaire's Le Voyage)

new challenge words:
hands
safe
blindfold

[jeanne]

As the hands are tied
The feet bound
And blindfold applied
She's safe and sound.

New words: tea, morning, sunrise

[thrall]

I watch the night
fade to dawn
sunrise on the horizon

gentle breeze
morning dew
glistens in the light

I sit and watch
the the new daybreak
warmed by a cup of tea




new words

play
fate
rapture

hi His j

[jeanne]

Hi thrall! It's been a while...

Fate stepped in
Providence
Karma

Call it what you will
Just play with me
Just play me
Give me the rapture
I've never known

New words: demand, command, request

[thrall]

I feel his voice
The absolute command

The demand of the flesh
The request of the soul

From within, I burn
My joy is his


new words

flavor
partake
enjoy

[jeanne]

Submission has a flavor
Could be chocolate - rich and creamy
Could be cinnamon - warm and spicy
Could be jalapeno - hot and jolting
Could be popcorn - buttery smooth with a dash of salt
For me, submission is multifaceted - a warm winter casserole
Each flavor for him to partake - to choose
Each taste for him to enjoy

New words: hard, soft, punish

[thrall]

Hard hands
Deliver the blow

To soft skin
Now to glow

punish me and
My love will flow


new words

kiss
warm
delve

[jeanne]

Greeting her with a kiss
Sliding a hand over her warm skin
Leading her on his journey
Letting her delve deeper into her submission.

new words: first, last, always

[thrall]

In waking dreams
First thoughts of day
Your always in my mind

At end of day
When dreams my come
My last thoughts of you


new words

ocean
tides
cold

[John56{vg}]

I am the moon cold
alone

but I am connected to you.

My ocean, teeming with life

I move the tides of our earth
as I orbit your heavenly body.


lock
fright
mask

[ElectricBadger]

Thrice I crashed against the lock
And thrice I broke the chain,
Smashing down your lovely gate
Of gilt and golden plate.
Your face a mask of fright and shock
Time and time and time again.


Electric, voltage, arc.

[moptop]

I walk under the vibrating pylons
Feeling the buzz and tasting the electric sky.
My hair bristles with the rampant voltage.
A sudden crack, a flash,
a synthetic arc of lightning make me cry out.
I duck and uselessly protect my head,
covering it with my hands. I jump
as near me I hear a thud.

Tentatively still alive, I look towards the sound.
A smouldering bird lies on the ground.



self-esteem, fabricated, furry (that's as in fur, not fury!! lol)

[ElectricBadger]

Like faux furry wardrobes, pet friendly
-- No animals were harmed in the making! --
Our fragile self esteems are fabricated
In third world sweatshops by children
Fifteen hours a day, for pennies,
Perfume, electronics, and eight cylinder chrome
Conceals us, the spotlights blind admirers
To our emptiness within.



Silk; Red; Chrome.

[moptop]

The paintwork is smooth as silk.
Itching to be touched, it gleams
in the sun; I stroke it,
running my fingers in sensuous pleasure
along this gleaming flank,
red like the fire of desire.
I admire my deformed face
in the gleaming chrome work.
The throb and growl as the engine turns over
speak to me of lust.
I would give myself willingly to this beast.


New words: yellow; boat; anvil

[thrall]

The anvil struck
Blade to heaven
Yellow sails
Billow in the wind,
Sweet journey
Funeral boats of Valhalla


new words
gift
grace
time

[Ozme52]

Grace me with the gift of time.
Time to find the perfect rhyme.
A rhyme that all will find sublime.
Grace me with the gift of time.

-------------
piece
niece
crease

[thrall]

^....geez oz.....lmao.....what the heck kind of words are those???....lol

within the crease
i find my niece
and all the pieces of her crumbled world


new words...

hold
hands
firm

[craven]

Short Drop


Cell walls will cage or hold him no more
Defeated and dejected he stands firm
Freedom lost, steel hands gripping flesh
Liberty surrendered, the butterfly crushed
Sallow faced, with desolate downcast eyes
Mumbling, his peace, he seeks to make
Discarded and faithless pleas unanswered
Trembling hands, heralding his inner fear
Silence shattered, explodes the trap door,
Light to dark, breathless, flame extinguished
whispering smoke he is no more

[craven]

I guess I get to pick the next words OK

breathless
mountains
whispy

[craven]

Heaven's Gate

As sentinels they stand, pillars tall
Greedily drinking the sun’s golden glow,
Breathless clouds, their peaks enshrined
The heavens bourn upon crumbling shoulders
Mountains from the sea, onwards ever upwards
Whispy thoughts & snatched dreams
Meander atop tree covered snowy trails
Hanging in the breeze, hope filled skies
Man’s emotions traverse heavens pass.


OK I felt the need to have a crack with those words, feel free to use them also

or alternatively if Whispy, breathless Mountains do not appeal

How about

dark, lustful, intent

Have fun

[thrall]

Look closely into the dark
Where lustful dreams bloom
Can you find your way
Arms stretched
Intent upon finding


somehow i knew you would love this game craven.......and i miss my iron poet friend...



mistress
giving
life

[craven]

Head bowed, her beauty astounds me
Captivated and enthralled in awe I kneel
Her control absolute, my joy to serve
No defeat in my surrender, strength I feel
My mistress bringing light from dark
Life complete, my place assured at her heel


Thanks for the words Thrall, I feel you may have been trying to help LOL

Here you go in return


Soul
Swallows
saddens

[thrall]

The darkness of space
Unable to swallow the light
Engulfed we are in the mire
That saddens the soul






reach
hold
sun

[craven]

Grasping for light
Divided souls reach
Tasting the sun
Hold me tight

You are the one

Thank You Thrall for sharing this with me

can you use (well I know you can)


banner
dreams
forgotten

[thrall]

Where banners once flew
Upon once mighty walls
Decay weighs heavily
Over the oubliette
Of forgotten dreams





judge
pleasure
attain

[craven]

In pleasure love we seek
To attain such riches souls weep
Judge not who but what I am

How about these

tranquility
enduring
peace

[caligirl{Rob}]

soft tranquiltiy in Your touch
Your dominance means so much
the pain i find so alluring
my submission, all enduring
aching for that sweet release
where my soul achieves its peace

blistering, passion, temper

[craven]

Your blistering passion filled eyes
Lustful gaze drinking my flesh
My pulse racing heart pounding
Senses reeling I taste the anger
Smell your temper and fire within
Punish me now, cleanse my skin
Release me, make me whole again



Here you go

Screaming
soft
veins

[caligirl{Rob}]

He pulled her back
with veins exposed
sharp thorns extract
blood from the rose
soft petals wet
sweetly gleaming
how he loves his pet
when she's screaming


enter
guest
first

[thrall]

Enter if you dare
The world of my passion
I will be the first to warn you
Safe you are, Guest of mine
But your time runs out with the tide





jest
thrill
complete

[caligirl{Rob}]

Your words thrill my soul
Complete the scene with Your touch
was it all in jest

cargo
limber
sunshine

[thrall]

Fragile cargo
The thoughts in the mind
Lay dormant
waiting
To flex and become limber
In the warm sunshine of time


grace
precious
glass

[craven]

Mesmerized in awe I wonder
As precious glass, beauty apparent
Light refracting as rainbows
Prized above all else, to hold & Keep
Her control assured, without sound
Beyond value my eyes weep
Pulses racing, as one, hearts pound


new words

Longing
forever
mourn

[caligirl{Rob}]

I mourn the loss still
longing for the innocence
forever taken

ghost
heart
mountain

[craven]

From mountains peak, to the darkest depths
My heart extends its welcome, warm embrace
lost souls and ghostly apparitions I evade
to once again, gaze lovingly upon, your face

time
saves
love

[thrall]

Adrift in time,
Where pain come in measured breaths
Adrift with the darkness
Broken
Waiting in time
For the love that comes
And saves





fallow
fertile
growth

[craven]

Like the light from dawn
Gently kissing dew laden soil
My love, bringer of growth
Turning all that was fallow
From wasteland to green &
Fertile plains, endless in bounds
Forever as far as the mind can see
Our souls together, Thrall and thee

New words hmmmmmm

castle
thunder
mists

[caligirl{Rob}]

in the castle he creates
entwined within her dreams
his touch forever satiates
brings forth anguished screams
the thunder rages uncontrolled
her thoughts a veiled mist
the raging storm now lulled
no reason for her to resist
as in this castle he is king
to him she does belong
she won't deny him anything
not even her sweet song


summer
loft
umbrella

[craven]

Summer rains dance across the skies
Refracting light & splintering reality
Technicolor beams abound with energy
Held aloft my shielding umbrella
Protection afforded, my haven created
From safety I gaze upon heavens wonder


they were i felt tricksy words yes tricksy indeed

new ones


faithful
deny
honour

[thrall]

^that was beautiful craven....


Honor bound
Faithful to the last
I deny you nothing




anguish
pain
pleasure

[craven]

My heart gripped
My senses wracked
Looking upon your face
My being divided, anguish
Uncertainty abounds, pain
Tasting of pleasure


new words er......

flavoured
memories
dreams