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Echoes
10-10-2006, 12:10 PM
Early spring glows in autumn

Enraptured,
willful capture by sunray,
pulsed shimmer turning slow,
graceful plummeted pirouette
as petals of liquid sighs
plumed flutter against
unclothed and suppliant skin.

His breath, soft
whispers, ricocheted miles absent
as words painted throbbing
heartbeat, a painful escalate
into torn threadbare desire,
aching seared compellation
then ecstasy trembles tranquility.

Rivulets brim, spill,
pooled wading dreams,
serene aspirations shared,
escalated longing to be,
for genteel convergence
or fiery lock of glance
embraced by unwavering breeze

two cohesive one,
fettered abandoned leaf in early spring
on a gingered sugar maple
before sap ran sweet,
solidify upon soothing freeze
before gasped moment,
soft palpitations irrevocably free.

Talia
10-10-2006, 06:47 PM
I almost moved this..but then I re-read this and re-read it again. This is a very erotic poem. Glad you posted it and hope you will share others.

violetgem
10-17-2006, 06:10 PM
This does need to be re-read to let it fully sink in, but wow, really nice!!