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Echoes
10-18-2006, 07:29 PM
sitting here between
the third last thought
and now,
which is now past
again…
floating relaxation,
empty mind.

Superstitiously
word silent, mind filled
with a wish,
a hope quivering,
unsure of whether to stay,
flee,
or just flutter around.

Twice now made,
then again
as i light the candles,
and blend, faltering
with dancing darkness,
a shadow fuses to light
and curls again.

Timberwolf
10-19-2006, 09:12 PM
Quite interesting. I like it.

moptop
10-20-2006, 02:34 AM
I think this is lovely - evocative - your thoughts seem like moths around the candle flames. Don't understand it, though!