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poetic_justice
10-23-2006, 02:47 AM
The strength of his arms around you
In the darkness of the night,
His warm fingers moving through your damp hair
As you close your eyes, and embrace this beauty.

A smile crosses your warm pink lips
At the feel of his calming breath on your neck, your shoulder,
Heart fluttering against your chest
As cool fingers wander down pale freckled flesh.

For it took so long to find
These feelings of pleasure and hope,
The knowing that you are safe
And wanted in his arms.

And all the time you smile
As his strong hands sculpt your flesh,
Back arching from the bed
As his fingers, warm and demanding, link with yours again.

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moptop
10-23-2006, 06:18 AM
As cool fingers wander down pale freckled flesh.


Love that line
Echoes
10-23-2006, 06:38 AM
why would this not be placed in erotic poetic_justice...for it is simply so and beautiful to read. It made my heart sigh. Thank you.
Warbaby1943
10-23-2006, 06:42 AM
Very nice.
Timberwolf
10-23-2006, 11:10 AM
I also thought it was very erotic, but any way I look at it, it's wonderful poetry.

It's good to have you back poetic_justice.
Talia
10-23-2006, 11:59 AM
I feel this is very erotic and should be moved to Erotic Poetry. This was very nice pj.

Talia
TheDeSade
10-23-2006, 01:06 PM
If someone doesn't find that erotic, then they need to check their body temp because it is probably approaching room temperature. Very nice, great images.
delight{DTT}
10-23-2006, 04:35 PM
That was beautiful, gave me goosbumps!
poetic_justice
10-24-2006, 12:30 AM
Thankyou, so much :)
Sir_G
10-24-2006, 12:51 AM
If someone doesn't find that erotic, then they need to check their body temp because it is probably approaching room temperature. Very nice, great images.

Couldn't agree more, such a talented and beautiful girl. Love your work my beautiful girl.
poetic_justice
10-24-2006, 03:01 AM
Couldn't agree more, such a talented and beautiful girl. Love your work my beautiful girl.

*blushes furiously*

Thankyou, Master.
frankee
10-28-2006, 10:14 PM
Very Erotic and incredible!
ElectricBadger
10-29-2006, 11:34 PM
Really great work, Poetic! Thank you for sharing it!