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Mack_Bolan{lily}
10-23-2006, 10:59 PM
Tender words spoken
The marks left are a token of what we share
Intense moments your little cries
The fire in my belly ignited by your sighs

Laughter tinkling like crystal glasses
Feeling like you are more mine as each day passes
Your curves inspire me
Knowing you desire me

Will you go where I go
Will you follow me will you reap what I sew
Seeds of passion and desire
That only germinate in the heat of the fire

Reach out and touch me
Your submission sets me free
Stroke my loins and lick my shaft
And we'll disappear in the fires backdraft

Exploding like a nova blinding light
Stellar moments precious as gold submissions delight
Laying there shaking like a leaf
Then withdrawing from your silken sheath

And yet you are so far away
A sea and half a continent lay in the way
Large obstacles that seem so small
As you touch my heart and make me feel tall

Timberwolf
10-23-2006, 11:14 PM
Wow.

You take good care of lily. She's a special woman. I don't think there's much doubt that you know it, either.

lily27
10-23-2006, 11:15 PM
This literally brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you, my most wonderful Sir. I have so much more to say, but the words just won't come at the moment.

I am the luckiest girl in the world.

- Your lily

curious_1{K}
10-23-2006, 11:28 PM
That was beautiful Mack!

Hugs lily and hands her a tissue

lily27
10-23-2006, 11:29 PM
Hugs lily and hands her a tissue

Thanks....got anymore of those??

elyse
10-24-2006, 07:21 AM
Thanks....got anymore of those??

*passes the box of tissues around*

Mack_Bolan{lily}
10-24-2006, 05:23 PM
Thanks TW, Curi and of course my girl. It's nice to have a place where one can express emotions such as these.

poetic_justice
10-24-2006, 05:28 PM
Beautiful.

You're a very lucky girl lily :)
*hugs*

lily27
10-24-2006, 05:44 PM
Beautiful.

You're a very lucky girl lily :)
*hugs*

You've got that right. :woohoo:

MsUther
10-24-2006, 05:46 PM
Such a wonderful poem. And Yay! for you both :)

frankee
10-27-2006, 10:36 PM
*takes a tissue*

*sigh* that just turned me to mush.

Echoes
10-27-2006, 10:57 PM
this was absolutely wonderful and ... sighs
can't think right now but it takes a person to a beautiful place.
hugs lily
you both have so much love and it shows strongly

lily27
10-28-2006, 07:57 AM
MsUther, frankee, Echoes....thank you for your kind words.

Sir is a gifted writer....I take no credit for that....but I do feel very lucky to have found him. And that he made me his.

*sniffles again*

slaveangel{HM}
11-10-2006, 03:45 AM
Sir is a gifted writer....I take no credit for that....but I do feel very lucky to have found him. And that he made me his.

*sniffles again*



*takes a tissue for herself and wipes her eyes, giving one to lily too*


This poem is remarkable.


Thankyou so much Sir MB, for sharing this with us.


*gives an extra special hug to lily darling*