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slaveangel{HM}
11-06-2006, 08:43 PM
I wrote this a few minutes ago. Damn my spontaneous thoughts. Somehow they always lead to poetry xx


Sitting alone in the room
Wondering when You will pass
Measured footsteps I no longer hear
Hands I shall no longer feel

I close my eyes and try to
Bring You back to me
Moving trembling fingers
Caressing them upon cool skin

Nipples hardening under my touch
Craving for You to see
For they are alive for You
If only in a memory

Roused by Your voice
Carried by the wind
Legs parting naturally
As You gaze from within

My fingers graze lightly
Over my quivering flesh
Wanting so much
Yet knowing it isn't to be

I cry out in anger
Masked with sadness
As I will myself in fury
Pushing myself to the end

Thrusting and rubbing
A renewed hand
Craving to see You
Wanting You to prevent me

Fevered fingers dance
Causing me to pitch and writhe
Growling in lust and anger
Stop me, silence me with a word

Shuddering without release
As my shame spills
In a torrent of the past
Exhausted in my lust

Whispering a Name
Smiling in recognition and Love
Pondering the future
In the arms of Another.


November 7th, 2006

frankee
11-06-2006, 09:46 PM
That was GREAT!

i could feel the eroticism and the sadness in your words.

TheDeSade
11-06-2006, 09:48 PM
Very intense. Begs for several more readings and some time to absorb the underlying images. I like it very much

Timberwolf
11-06-2006, 10:29 PM
Powerful work.

learningtopleez
11-06-2006, 10:33 PM
Beautiful words angel! :)

lily27
11-06-2006, 10:49 PM
A gorgeous poem.

Another, eh?? Hmmmmmm....

*smiles*

moptop
11-07-2006, 03:50 AM
Oh, that was beautiful, angel, really moving. Thank you

Talia
11-17-2006, 07:21 PM
Words fail me. The current underneath speaks louder than the words. Wonderful job angel.

Talia