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Echoes
11-10-2006, 12:01 PM
stars walking...
members of action,
merely a distraction
of muscled contraction
and shocking abstractions.

Brazen flesh flashes...
pressing fluid oscillations,
slow sensual undulations,
added rhythmic alternations,
rippled flowing fluctuations.

Whispered glances reveal...
blatant eyes masterbating
bared thighs, consternating
lean lines, exasperating
heights of recreating.

A corporeal constellation...
winking frivolously,
teases tumbled numerously,
weathering capriciously,
simply, scandalously

yours...for your affection,
a loving reaction,
caring predilection,
for when coarse clouds permeate
they sing dereliction.

Echoes
11-10-2006, 12:11 PM
each subsequent line of each verse can be read as a separate poem. The way I have it originally formatted allows this, but I do not know how to format it this way here. As example...the first line in each stanza reads;

stars walking...
Brazen flesh flashes...
Whispered glances reveal...
A corporeal constellation...
yours...for your affection,

the second line in each stanza reads;

members of action,
pressing fluid oscillations,
blatant eyes masterbating
winking frivolously,
a loving reaction,

Timberwolf
11-10-2006, 12:35 PM
"each subsequent line of each verse can be read as a separate poem. "

Fascinating... quite interesting indeed.

You are a very talented poet.

moptop
11-10-2006, 01:25 PM
echoes, so good to see you posting, and that is soooo clever - I need time to read/think on it to really be able to appreciate it. Once again, amazed by your creative abilities.

TheDeSade
11-10-2006, 01:40 PM
echoes, you continue to astound and delight me. How totally unequalled in anything I have seen yet. You surely are above and beyond me in your creativity and your ability.

Echoes
11-10-2006, 02:39 PM
thank you Timberwolf, moptop and TDS...hey, did you know I wanted to be a poet when I grew up? :p
Seriously, is it not all about passion, love, imagination and freedom to strive to do the best you can in what you do and are?
To each who brings a smile, a touch, an embrace in some form to at least one person...:rose: