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poetic_justice
11-12-2006, 11:40 PM
Blood coursing through your veins
That delicious sense of lust,
Warm smile across the front seat
His hand brushing soft hair from you face,
As he gently squeezes the back of your neck
Pulling you softly closer.

His eyes close for a moment
Your warm breath near His ear, soft lips,
Whispering, in exquisite detail, everything
As your hand slips between His knees,
And the stereo blares louder
Muffling the soft moan from His lips.

You have that feeling in your heart
Your teeth gently caressing His ear,
Taking hold of that maddening heat beneath His pants
With that feeling of adrenaline within your body,
Speed increasing
With the throbbing of His cock.

He finds it hard to steer
As your cool grip tightens,
That addictive warmth trembling in your hand
And He pulls you, laughing to His lap,
The pure hardness of him pressing higher to your fingers,
And he swerves hard, blowing his load on that loved, pale flesh.

The car stops in the middle of the freeway
As He kisses you deeply, ragged breath mixing with your own,
As the angry drivers blare all around
Yet He whispers to your ear, His hands on your arse,
"You're my world, Angel"
And you feel safe, and loved, again.

copyright © Tracey Cobb

Timberwolf
11-12-2006, 11:52 PM
As always, I enjoy your work a great deal. You paint such vibrant pictures with your words, make me feel like I'm there.

poetic_justice
11-13-2006, 12:07 AM
If you were, you'd either have a great view, or be a very lucky guy ;)

Thankyou Timberwolf, your words always mean so much to me :)
Kinda dangerous though, stopping a car in the middle of a freeway. It all added to the adrenaline rush of the experience.

vampyres{ID}
11-13-2006, 12:08 AM
That was hot, excelent

poetic_justice
11-13-2006, 04:26 AM
Thankyou for the lovely comment :)

Echoes
11-17-2006, 05:34 PM
poetic_justice, you write so descriptively and wonderfully...it hurts; it is so real, it hurts; it is so beautiful. I have read this so many times and just now able to reply. Thank you for sharing this.

Talia
11-17-2006, 07:16 PM
Blood coursing through your veins
That delicious sense of lust,
Warm smile across the front seat
His hand brushing soft hair from you face,
As he gently squeezes the back of your neck
Pulling you softly closer.

His eyes close for a moment
Your warm breath near His ear, soft lips,
Whispering, in exquisite detail, everything
As your hand slips between His knees,
And the stereo blares louder
Muffling the soft moan from His lips.

You have that feeling in your heart
Your teeth gently caressing His ear,
Taking hold of that maddening heat beneath His pants
With that feeling of adrenaline within your body,
Speed increasing
With the throbbing of His cock.

He finds it hard to steer
As your cool grip tightens,
That addictive warmth trembling in your hand
And He pulls you, laughing to His lap,
The pure hardness of him pressing higher to your fingers,
And he swerves hard, blowing his load on that loved, pale flesh.

The car stops in the middle of the freeway
As He kisses you deeply, ragged breath mixing with your own,
As the angry drivers blare all around
Yet He whispers to your ear, His hands on your arse,
"You're my world, Angel"
And you feel safe, and loved, again.

copyright © Tracey Cobb


;) ok....got halfway though the poem and had to relook at the title. Ever heard of Nickelback's song Animals? The similarities are uncanny! *giggles*

You did wonderfully on this...glad to see you posting more poems sweetie.

poetic_justice
11-17-2006, 08:42 PM
LOL. Yep Talia, I have heard the song. In fact I was listening to it just after I finished writing and nicked the title. :)

Ah, memories. LMAO

Talia
11-17-2006, 10:53 PM
LOL. Yep Talia, I have heard the song. In fact I was listening to it just after I finished writing and nicked the title. :)

Ah, memories. LMAO

*giggles* Bad girl!