Rage

[TheDeSade]

Rage
Rage and torment
Inwardly turned
Sorrowed

Unfeeling
Not hearing, not seeing
Stupidly Done
Ignoring

Devastated
Self loathing abounds
Emotions done
Fear

Sorrowed
Beginnings ended before
Really begun
Lost

[moptop]

Not easy. Disjointed. Appropriate to the emotions. Spitting anger. Resigned in sorrow. Brings emptiness of loss at end. I think this is one that might grow on me.

[Leigh]

Very nice I can definitely relate to this today

[Radiance]

Very nice indeed

[SheepishJaina]

Nice one TDS.

I can really feel the emotions behind this poem, and certainly have been able to relate to it.